Can you share your Front view also… Also maybe avoid putting so much Focal lenses distortion… It’s very weird and hard to critics.
Something like those ref are maybe focal lenses of 100mm, you could try to match that
[left]Don’t hesitate to post your reference also. I dont know what front/aside view you’re using for sculpt Angelina Jolie, we need to see
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I can’t do critics with that lense distortion. Please provide orthographic view of your heads (none distortion by the camera lense)
I can’t tell if its lens distortion or your model is actually like that, if you’re not gonna fix it as Scote been suggesting, could you at least post screenshots of the viewport?, and don’t forget the references.
Are you aiming for realism, or what style are you looking for?
My guess is that you use the following …35mm image as reference for the front view. Ignoring the lens distortion of the picture made you model it wrong. But I will wait to see to orthographic views before judging yuour modeling techniques
Let me expain the lens distortion issue: You lose the ears and the main shape of the face. It’s very hard to sculpt a model without knowing that factor.
We are still waiting to see your reference pictures
Thanks for sharing. I create a ref head board from Angelina using google images. Maybe that will help you achieve your goal of likeness
Mainly the eyes are to big to be realistic. Also the iris his way to big and that black pupil is too open (could be realistic, if someone flash you to take a picture your eyes try to adapt and the pupil contract)
The head is a bit big also compare to the rest of the body.
Of course my 3/4 view ref didn’t have the same rotation, so you should adjust base on that.
I also don’t know the focal lense of these pictures but by rule of thumbs, I can guess a 80-120mm
cheers
Hey. Can somebody tell somebody else?
Can the characters must be placed in the inside poznmelya, and not outside?
I think the model is good, but maybe you need some more work on sss shader, as now shadows look too opaque.
First of all choose a different light setup, its too one sided, play around with a new setup, make the light model your object, it has to be appealing to the eye, it has to catch people’s attention at first sight, perhaps if the scene took place inside the dungeon would be better, so you throw in a couple of torches to light the scene, then you start building a simple three point light setup, play around with it until you have an interesting lighting system.
Then focus on all your shaders, they look too simple, that’s why it looks fake, for example, look at his armor or at her clothes, its just a simple mate, where’s the dirt, dust, scratches, etc.
