Week 4: WIP/Homework Submissions


#82

Thanks for the feedback!! I agree with the unusual feeling of the third - I think I might end up combining a few aspects of multiple thumbnails.


#83

Wow, great detail and color.


#84

Thanks!


#85

Brian Lorenz Week 4 WIP
I feel like I’ve got a mysterious vibe going here. Not quite what I was aiming for initially but, I think I can make it work.


I need to fix my lighting.

Making Progress


#86

It is done, I’m really satisfied with the final result.

And the perspective used.


#87

Tried to add more details and refined lots of my edges, did some colours tweaks,
I think adding those grass, roads, flowers,fogs textures/details really brought my piece to life.
Any critique is much appreciated :slight_smile:


#88

Thanks for your comment. Will look in to this soon.


#89

Thanks for the feedback. I was concerned with 5 because it looks too saturated, but I think I’ll go with a mix of both.


#90

Nice one! I do like this one much better as well. Orange and blue/purple always go well together :slight_smile: good use of color scheme.


#91

Thank you. :slight_smile:


#92


Jonathan Stratis, Week 4
I finally got time to work on this piece! I was swamped with work last week so I couldn’t work on it was much as I wanted to. Redid the linework and followed the suggestions to brighten up the scene a bit and separate the values.


#93

Amazing!!! Great job!!!


#94

That’s my week 4 assignment submission

I will try to work more on it.

I couldnt get a decent result with coloring the gray scale so I used week 03 grayscale submission as a reference and painted opaque on top.

Any feedback is welcomed

thanks!


#95

Hi,
really great work.Only thing i maybe would change is the size of that cart in the front. For me it seems to be a bit to big in comparison to the rest of the environment.
But hey great work!!!


#96

Seem to work better. Thanks.


#97

Hi all,
Now I combined number 1 and 2….
So thanks again for your suggestions.


#98

HI,
I really like the top right one. The combination of red and green works really great.
somehow it looks like a big storm is rising up.
Great work!


#99

I liked the color scheme of 2 and 5.


#100

I love how the technique you used makes this look like an oil painting. I think you did a great job of actually painting all this. You have a good mood here, like this is a son or a hero returning home.

The only thing I wondered about at all was the shadow on the horse. I’m thinking it wouldn’t come to a point unless there were two light sources but I’m still learning about using light myself so…


#101

Thank you so much! I didn’t know that! I’ll play with it :smile: