Want Some Critique for my animation


#1

Hey guys, I want to start an animation short series. I have initial scene finished, i want your advice and suggestions to make it better. Please check my video below and let me know what do you think.

https://youtu.be/LLpGaqHz8xk

This is a story of two dumpling friends escaping their steamer and now on the way to their favorite place Kathmandu, Nepal.


#2

Hi. I am not the expert on anything, but I like the music, sounds. Style is also nice. If you make some short animation series with some story behind, I would like to watch it no time :slight_smile: