Uplift Universe - Video Entry: Liviu Berechet

#21

Me too! :slight_smile:

#22

Software: 3ds max

I still have a lot of work on the spaceship. Have to make the command center in the front. Some defense systems. And then it’s off to texturing.

#23

Software: 3ds max,After Effects

Ok… Please send me any feedbacks you want… I really need them… still don’t know what I don’t like.

One thing is THE CODEC !!! it takes away all the contrast…

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#24

ok… now that the second has no resemblance to the first scene i’ve made, ill have to redo one of them… or both… :frowning:

#25

Start to look great!Keep going!:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

#26

Awesome work! Bafta. :slight_smile:

#27

The overall quality is very good. The thing is these planets look very small like balls, you could fix perspective / size to make them more “overwhelming” and spectacular. Rest is perfect
-CHEERS

#28

Thanks guys.

fgdf: this idea could work, i’ll try… thx again.

#29

yeah really cool job, i really like the final render :slight_smile:

I’m agree with fgdf though, i think you can easily fix the scale problem by scaling the main planet to fill ± 50/60% of the background, and get the moons a bit smaller and more blurry (we shouldn’t see relief on it)

You should maybe use a bigger focal lenght (for this scene only), to enhance perspectives :wink:

#30

First… I’ll finish the next scene that i’ve started working on, so that i won’t fell the dedline pressure. Then i’ll start making adjustments until every body is happy :slight_smile:

#31

I would add an atmosphere around the planet, unless of course, it’s uninhabitable:) I like everything else, so keep going, look forward to seeing more.

#32

I’ll work on it, thanks :slight_smile:

#33

Looking good, but planet is too bumpy, work on atmosphere more. Space ship looks very good, so keep on !

#34

So far… need to make tha planets a little bigger and put some atmosphere on the planet. I’ll work on it as soon as i finish my next scene.
Thanks!

#35

Well… it seems that i might switch to team :frowning:

#36

Hey man,

sorry for not posting any sooner (kind of sick for a little while and i always wait to do stuff)

anyway,
the render is really starting to look great. My only concern is this:
i think the 3 visible planet seems to be way too close to one another. Putting more distance would create the illusion of a much bigger space and then it would have some more spectacle.
Second i believe there is a glow coming from the closest planet but it’s more like a glow then it should be a fog-looking atmosphere. And at the sides it should look much denser. Also the same glow on the furthest planet look kind of too far spread.

just one little detail :twisted:
the furthes planet seems the be lit by the sun that we see in this image. But the others and the ship seems to have a secondary light source :argh:

don’t forget in space there is no light bounce and no ambient light :thumbsup:

cheers and waiting to see more

#37

The 1st part, your absolute right: the planets look to close to one another and the fog shoud be a little denser.

The 2nd part.
Every element has it’s own light sources (ship, main planet and the 2 moons). I did this so that i could get the look that i was hoping for. It’s not 100% natural but you get a better looking scene (that’s my way of thinking)

About the light bounce… i have a question for you… way does the moon project light at night? :stuck_out_tongue:

Sorry if i didn’t agree on every aspect with you, but thanks for those that i do agree.
Keep it up, and hope you post me more comments if you see something wrong
:beer:

#38

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