Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Ramón Acedo


#14

Yeah. The last one looks better. In my opinion you did really well quitting the pistol from the human’s hand because he is not going to shot if he looses isn’t he? xd. Also the pistol was like giving the idea of a bloody future and not a safe exciting funny confrontation concept I got looking the rest of the picture. Keep the good work, I will be looking forward the background.


#15

it seems that the alien is stronger than the human. is that the way you thought?
if so, i like … it gives the idea of a big effort from the human side to try to win this simple competition!

pretty nice drawing!
:thumbsup:


#16

Very effective idea and good drawing on it, welcome to the contest Ramixton :slight_smile:


#17

Fun idea, Ramón! It’s funny, just yesterday a friend was suggesting the idea of a thumb-wrestling match as a good idea for the Uplift Challenge. (Don’t worry, it wasn’t someone entering, they were just saying I should do that, but I’m happy with my own idea.) Anyhow, this is better. It feels like there’s still room for you to bulk up the size of their hands and wrists: they feel a little wimpy compared to the two tough men themselves. But great design so far, keep it coming!

-mike


#18

muy bello el sketch. suerte en el concurso . ya me imagino una luz de lampara tipo el padrino alumbrando eso!


#19

Hi, I’ve done a quick colouring to establish my palette. Truth is I’m eager to start painting, but I should define the alien costume and right arm first.


#20

AresDeUbaidis, thanks, glad you like it. At first I liket the idea of implicit violence the pistol showed, but I think now as you pointed that the concept of competition between races is better defined without it.

laurentino,
I didn’t intend it to be so, but why not?, In fact nothing is decided yet and I have to tweak it enormously yet.

DeeVad, Nice to see you too my friend.

Walrus, Thanks a lot Mike. I’m grateful you didn´t decide on the thumb wrestling contest, else I would be doomed.

chilombiano, Gracias compadre.


#21

Good progress Ramon. It looks good already. Ill keep an eye on this entry. buena suerte.


#22

Hi:wavey:,
I like your concept and sketch, looking forward to see more of your entry
Good luck to you:thumbsup:

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#23

Very solid so far, and I dig the idea of humans meeting aliens… and starting a bar brawl, or a arm wrestle in this case! Genius… :smiley:
Just a comment, watch out for the back light, keep it on the alien side since the humans’ fair space suits might unbalance the overall light. Apart from that, again , very very nice pic this one.

Muy bueno, Ramón, me encanta la idea de encontrarse y ponerse a ver quien es el más chulo del barrio a lo bar de carretera! Lo mejor de las razas en viaje espacial y acaban a tortas! Genial!


#24

Awesome drawing, Ramon! Love it! Keep it up! Fascinating to watch how you block in the colours…

Dimitrij.


#25

A very simple but in my opinion very good concept! I like the fact, that arm wrestling shows the conflict between the human and the alien but also emphasises that they have much in common (e.g. two arms :slight_smile: ). Sport unites them in a conflict so to say. :slight_smile:


#26

I agree with all the other comments - great, simple idea! Its also cool that they seem to be at a stand-still in the image.

One thing that I think not quite right is the alien’s hand. It looks too human to me (at least at this stage). If it were more ‘alien’ it would enhance the image - it would be great to see how a human hand can interlock with an alien form (claw-like, or tentacles wrapping up the human arm, etc). Their connection is already the focal point, so maybe if the aliens hand were hard to get a grip on, or much larger, enveloping the human hand…

great stuff - keep up the good work!


#27

Hey Ramón, cool concept and nice sketches!! Like the concept and the interaction on your image , really great! The palette looks working well ! For sure looking forward for more updates! ( Muy buen concepto, me gusta mucho la idea, y el color le esta dando una muy buena atmosfera a la imagen :D) Cheers mate!! :beer:


#28

Very nice concept, one that I considered myself but abandoned. I am glad I did because there is no way that I could compete with this. Excellent work full of force!


#29

Have to agree with Pixemo about the alien’s arm/hand. Also the arms/hands above and behind the main characters should look distinctively alien on the aliens side - it would help - just my opinion.

Cheers,

Dimitrij.


#30

I’ve corrected the position of the alien’s arm, I think now it shows better the effort of its owner and looks more natural. I want both of the arm wrestlers sweat their prize.


#31

Hi Pixemo, thank you for your kind words. In fact I want to show the difference between alien and human with the texturee of the skin. Maybe some tattos, don’t know yet, but I think it is not necessary to use weird appendages to show it is not human. Remember Star Trek.


#32

I like this idea and composition. Simple, yet strong and focused. Keep it goin. I agree about the background hands. I would add, that in the final render, maybe you can have some of the hands in back other than at 90 degree view to the viewer. It’s a simple way to add more depth to the pic.


#33

Nice concept. :slight_smile: I wonder who wins that encounter. A $ on the alien!