Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Markus Wuestemeier

#21

just a little update. refining the background. changed the size of the main wasp, girl with higher resulotion …

#22

It’s going to be good!
I like the motion of this scene!

I’m not professional, but if I can tell you something, be careful with the tilt of the motorbike, specially with its reflection on the road…

And try to accentuate more the speed with girl hairs.

I can not wait to see more!
good luck

#23

Real nice job so far wueste. Love the active flow of the scene. Real cool.

#24

I like the feel, the colour space and the motion of this image. The only small criticism I can make is that with the bikes huge lean angle, front wheel turned in, the clutch in and no hand on the throttle, there will be only one outcome to this scenario…the bike will low-side (fall over on it’s side) and she will come flying off, ready to be finished off by the insects. Maybe a bit less lean, and straightening the front wheels will complete the already great detail and realism you have already created. Just a small thing, that a biker will pickup. Besides that, great work and I can’t wait to see it progress!

#25

o yea, the swift movement is really eyecatching :O, really exciting work…great effort!!

Marley

#26

here is a detail shot! … just a little update.

#27

take a closer look :wink:

greetz,
markus

#28

LightSovereign, headtrip, Dragneye, morganvillette

thanks for your comments and specially thanks for the tips and critique. iam really glad you appriciate my entry.

greetz,
markus

#29

update:

added lines and deailed the bike a little bit.

greetz,
markus

#30

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