Walrus: Hi Mike, that’s a very good observation there. Yes, I also felt that the focus is lost somewhere in the sunset. So I tweaked the painting again and yeah, it works. Thank you for your very useful crits! Much appreciated! I’ve also added more rock-jellyfishes in the horizon.
TCPortfolio: Thank you! I hope my next update will be more to your liking!
I’m going to go for the final soon. I’ll be quite busy after this, so no more tweaking.
Here’s the third and hopefully final revision. (Revision: more rock-jellyfishes, dimmer background and red rock jellyfishes, brighter ship interiors, some small fixes)
Story (from previous post):
Something bad happened down there on this strange seemingly uninhabited planet. They received a rather urgent call for the rescue ship to be summoned down to the surface. The victims: A Neo-Dolphin and a Neo-Chimp, with their human and alien chaperones. The human is their sister. The brothers, along with an alien pilot, made quickly for their destination. They found them hiding in a cave. The Neo-Dolphin was badly hurt and unconscious. The chimp, looking dumb-founded, kept exclaiming They are coming, they are coming. Their sister was really scared. As for the other alien chaperone, they could never make out its expression at all. They quickly got onto the rescue ship and attempted to fly away.
Before they could reach beyond the planets atmosphere, a swarm of rock-like jellyfishes suddenly appear before them. Powerful jolts of electricity lashed out from their tentacles. Some of them even rammed the ship with their ultra-strong rock walls. What exactly happened here? What were they doing down there in the first place? Will they survive?
I hope this will be the last revision unless any of you spot some mistakes I overlook. I am getting busy with other works now and will not be able to continue further with this. I wish you all the best with your entries, my fellow participants!
i think its truely done. i cant really thing of any way to make it better. awesome work here!
This is so well done, with refinements and careful considerations along the way to make it even better. Though I am a sucker for great landscapes, it is true that more rock/jellyfish solidified the threat. It makes sense to have a really dinged up ship with more scatches. A co-pilot in the back is nice too, to fill in that space and add more alien/human interaction. Again, I love your piece. Great work, can’t wait to see your other work you are working on now. Take care, and thanks for the inspiration.
Hey Jerome, the revision looks great! For sure the ship looks in a more danger 
I think the electric rays of the jelly fishes need to be more brigther and neat, except the rays of the jelly fish attacking the front of the ship and maybe some of the jelly fish charging electrical power to all of its body or glowing brighter for a inner body part, but are minor details , perhaps more a wish than a critic :D. I really like your image and the great enviroment on it, superb work my friend! And for this time no beers… better … yes! wine!! a lot of bottles of wine !! Cheers! 
I would say, you were done now 
Then you don’t have to post that story all the time 
Good luck
just fixing some painting mistakes I forgot to clean up. Increased the saturation on the ship and the sky.
Sorry, just felt that the saturation on the sky was too red. So I went back to the previous version.
Alright, alright, I’ll stop now!
Here’s a higher res version of the artwork:
Slav: Thank you, my friend! All the best with yours, Slav!
shauncharles: Thank you Shaun! I am currently working on small things for my office and friends now. Hopefully I get to start on a new personal painting soon. Thank you for your support! Cheers!
MartinNielsen: Thank you, Martin!
winchester: Swinging? Don’t you mean flying, like one of them rock-jellyfishes Or perhaps I didn’t get the slang. But thank you!
Jeromoo, congratulations! It is gorgeous from the overall composition to every single detail. 
I learnt a lot from you during this contest and thanks for the help and support you have been offering to me! Good luck! :applause:
Nice colors, and designs on the ship and the rock jellyfish thingys. Nice image overall. Details are nice and the comp is good. Congrats on finishing. I need to get my ass in gear and finish myself hehe. I still have some basketball to play on tuesday then it is back to finishing my image. Later jerome.
I really like this , the colors rock and everything else about it rocks too. Thanks for the help on my thread too, you gave me the little push I needed to attempt to paint that darn fat lady better.
Jerome really a strong piece and probabnly the only one who use the color like a perspective Brilliant .
hey Jerome,i gotta say this is one of the bst entry,love the colors,the cold and warm makes a great contrast to the overal scene,glad that uve finished it:)congrates and wish u tons of luck
That’s lovely, Jerome! Congrats on finishing. Thanks for posting the larger image. I t was nice to see a lot of the small details in context, like the cracks in the viewscreen that i’d never noticed before. Nice work on all the little bits of lightning too… heck, nice work on everything, I’m just appreciating new (to me) details. Glad you added more rock jellyfish, too - they really add to the threat, and make it feel more plausible that the ship would even encounter them. (It’s a big sky, after all!)
Anyhow, great work, as usual.
