I like your style on the human character. A few minor things I see is what other people have already commented on. The pose needs a little work, the right hip seems like you could bring it in a bit and of course the intersecting boot (i’m sure it’ll be fixed when you skin it). Also, It seems like the head is floating, maybe you could hint towards a neck going down into the suit. Other than that, it looks great!! I’ll keep following your thread.
Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Jack Zhang
JackZhang
#42
SDIMIS the best Maph: Thank you guys.
Cyberone: Thanks Simon. I love your giant panda. Good luck with your entry!
SweD: Your comments are very appreciated here, Cyril. I will try my best not to let you down.
JuanManuel: Hey Juan, the wireframes are posted as you requested.
Playmobil: Thank you Francesco. I decide to take two extra nights to fix some areas to get a better cartoony body and reskin it later.
digitaldecoy: What a great pleasure to have you here Daniel! I love your work in Expose 5 soooo much. Way too cute. I will fix the mesh of the boots tonight so they don’t create much problem when she bends her knees.
somethingofthesort: Wayne, you are absolutly right. she has no neck now 
I will put it on tonight. I won’t worry about this pose very much. This is just a quick turn table one, more or less for testing skinning result. I will repose her with her neo-chimp together after both characters are complete, with weapons etc. Give me another two nights, I will refine her.
JackZhang
#43
Day 08 note:
I took some advice of a senior and re-shaped Tiffany a little bit. Basically increased the arm and leg length, give a bit cartoon feeling to the legs as well. I also added neck.
weighting is 75% complete. Tomorrow I shall complete her with weapon.
I am 1 day behind the schedule.
rococo
#44
haha… gald to ur fixed model…
the leg is better than before…
but i think u can make she arm little muscle …and make thin and long …Mnnnnn…
NICE WORK…
HOHO…
ThomasWest
#45
Hi…
I saw your weeks are 7, 8 or 9 day long… 
When the passion come, sleep is a waist of time…
Great work, best luck for challenge…
Bye
JackZhang
#47
Day 09 note:
I finished the weighting. There are a few area in term of proportion have minor issue, I tried to fix them without affecting the weighting, but it didn’t work.
Time to make a decision, let her go or spend more time on her. I decide to pass on. I will zbrush refine some of the silhouette after posing her.
Neo-Chimp tomorrow.
antone-m
#48
I agree with ur decision mate its time to move on ...........cant wait to see the chimp :bounce:
RupertD
#49
Looking great. Love the closeup shots of the girl. Maybe theres still space to play with individual element sizing ie could the feet be smaller and the hands smaller? Colourwise maybe the blue hair should nudge towards charcoal? Looking forward to the chimp!
JackZhang
#50
Day 10 note:
A quick update on Tiffany’s weapon. I want to make her a small one, around the size of what princess Leia had but more next-gen.
Working on the head of the chimp.
alexichabane
#53
Great job on your female character model. I like the armour design a lot, it has a nice mix of classic sci-fi details and modern design elements (cool organic shapes with sharp angular cut lines). The way the weapon flows around her hand is especially nice.
JackZhang
#54
Day 10 note:
I named the chimp Knuckle. Finished the head today. According to the original schedule I suppose to finish the head yesterday. I was 2 days behind, and now I am a day behind. Catching up.
Dann-O
#55
Really liking the progress and look forward to knuckle and how he will turn out. Great toon look to it also.
TheFreak
#56
I really like the style of your work, looks great too.
Looking forward to seeing what you do with these guys
airflow
#58
Nice work mate, wanna see the final.
Id have entered if I wasnt doing Dw3 and all this freelance work. Id have probably done Hoopgirl from my gallery and an ailen on the back of a giant mount.
Cool work
