Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Jack Zhang

#181

wow, impressive work, mostly the modeling.

congratulations and good luck

#182

Getting better… :slight_smile: I think the alien in the back has too much fog though.

#183

It’s better with fog indeed.

Well done.

david.

#184

changed tiffany and knuckle’s pose.

#185

lovin it dude! :stuck_out_tongue: the fog really fills in nicely!

#186

I like the new layout, Jack! However, I’m not sure what you’re gaining by keeping Tiffan’ys weapon on her left hand.If she has a weapon, why is she hiding? Plus, you lose whatever expression you could have conveyed with that hand. What if, for example, you ditch the gun and put her right index finger to her lips as you had with soem earlier posts? Just an idea… Good luck!

#187

Looking good what overall look are you going for in the end. I hope you keep a CG look like a Pixar animation. I have been following yrou progress every step of the way I will go back to lurking now.

#188

Excellent modeling skills and great character design!

I like the composition and colour scheme, this artwork has a great feel and I look forward to seeing the final entry! Good luck.

#189

The fog brings something to the atmosphere . De plus ça uniformise ton illustration .

#190

I really love your modeling skills and I like the anticipation in that last pose. Tiffany urges Knuckles to hold back until she gives the signal and he waits, searching her face for the first instant of expression that says…LET THEM HAVE IT! This is a nice piece and I look forward to seeing the final render. Good luck! :applause:

#191

bg wip
full size 4300x 2419

#192

characters in.
tweaking each layer now.

#193

Great stylize character jack!

#194

Almost there. Should be ready by next Saturday, then submit on Sunday.

#195

i think making their alien eyes glow will give a more sinister look? what say buddy?
waiting for the final showdown! :bounce:
all the best man! :thumbsup:

#196

COOOOL STUUUF MAN!! yeah! the poses are perfect! the lights works pretty well! now i cant wait to see it finished!!

#197

nice characters, especially the alien’s eyes. goodluck!

#198

I apologize for not replying my own thread for a while. Life gets very busy and i’m pulling my hair out for each day’s progress.

Thanks all for the encouragement. Best wishes to all competitors~

#199

You know something Jack I like when the Lava gun was more shining I think it was more easy to recognize it … What do you think ?

#200

fixing character details tomorrow