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Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Giuseppe Severino
CartoonBox
#19
ok, now i’ve a background, i’ll work on the hologram because i dont like it…
sorry for the bad optimisation
THE NEXT IMAGE IS THE SAME BUT IN BEST JPEG’S QUALITY
Neubius
#20
looking really nice, i love your line style, super sweet with the colours in!
( space monkeys! yay! )
CartoonBox
#21
thx a lot
and sorry for the bad optimisation, it’s not easy to make a big format for the forum.
CartoonBox
#23
now it’s time for lighting and effects.
now, i need your comments to finalise, please post it, you can help me.
Pegahoul
#24
The alien council woman has a great design! Very cool. Keep it up ^^
more contrast on the lighting maybe, with the background darker and the green hologram as the brightest light and focal point of the scene.
skater
#26
good job;)!! i like it!! colors are very expressive;)!!!
I am curious for the final job :bounce: :buttrock:
CartoonBox
#27
Hi all!
I’ve constrated the colors.
Now, i need your eyes to finish it.
Do you think it can be ok now?
Or do you prefer the first version?
Post your critics, i’m ready!
and thx skater 
PS: hum, i think the first is best finally…
andreas-V
#29
Maybe it is a litttle too late to write this, but i think there is not enough going on in this picture.The Aliens are merly standing around, there is no communication between Alien Queen and hologram(they don’t look at each other).
Your painting style is great and i like the designs, but the piece could use a little more drama.
greetings
CartoonBox
#30
it’s not too late 
Thanks, i will draw a new man for the hologram and working on the Alien’s face
CartoonBox
#33
The countess
Himin the Countess, spokesman for the council is listening to Admiral Keith.
While its application of collision is about to be accepted, the monkeys are preparing to do their rebelion.
Hunk and Shlam, spies infiltrated as slaves of the Countess fear that the arrival of humans will be a problem for there plans…
(sorry for my english)
