I changed the pose for the Captain a bit. I thought about the position of the Blaster. It occured to me, that if you were approaching an enemy with a gun, you would point it at him. So why is the Captain pointing his Blaster to the ground? On the other hand, would you draw a gun, when you’re climbing a tree? I thought that maybe Captain Orion heard the alien girl scream an ran after her. He climbed the tree and than the Hawkbeast appeared. For a moment, the Captain is in shock but then he draws his weapon. That might add a bit of tension to the scene. Furthermore, the new position of the arm and gun directs the dynamic curve of the figure from it’s hand, through the head, through the arm and gun, into the leg. Before, the dynamic flow was a bit broken at the point of the gun. I’m curious what you are thinking about my dedcision!