hi,
i did only machine in this commercial (design, model, animation, light and texture), i need comment about this work, it’s my first big work where is real video blend with 3d.
vido file: http://www.michalmonart.com/zip/st_hq.zip
Michal Monart
www.michalmonart.com
perfect - great - no crits
perhaps you post this better once again in the finished3D area to get more feedback - maya area is mainly used for technical questions (other than lightwave or cinema area where people post there works)
once again - great animation
only crits I see now watching it more times is the realcamera.
1.st it looks very much like a fimestudio - specially the ceiling doesnt give the impression to be in a kiosk / shop
2.nd the realcamera stuff is a bit dark, perhaps too dark
but you said you were only working on the robo - that is brilliant - also the animation and timing is really good
I specially like the blue discs that are uncovered by this photoshutter
congrats on the work, nicely done 
the two things i would comment is that
1: the thing that the guy touches to bring down the robot seems to light up before he touches it.
2: the magazine the robot holds aint completely the same as the guy is reading even though it seems to be the same. the one the guy is reading got a gradient background behind the head, the one the robot is holding seems to have a solid color as a background
except that the video is great,
, even though i coudlnt understand a word they said 
very good, but there is no reflection of the robot on the talbe 
however, great work
retrop
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