This is looking very nice. Is the background and the floor on one simple plane or is it complex geo with camera mapping?
The character itself is too dark I guess. 20% more would be nice. But the rimlight do a very great job here to shape him.
And I would suggest you to add some dust or grain to get a more film like style. An environment fog would also produce more atmosphere.
I can’t wait to see more 
Maybe a short animation test with final comp
By the way. What programs do you use?
no-name-party: Are simple planes the bg and the floor and i add some noise and some fog (in the style of the short) i use only wings3d for modeling, maya for rig, render, shaders and after and photoshop for composition
Great stuff!
The 3d stuff is beginning to collect light and be a bit too dark in places, best to make it brighter towards your 2d images.
Very origional, want to see more!
i added fog and add more light and grain for get a movie mood i think i can add more grain, but today i gonna post a almost final composition animated! yey! jaja Commentes & critics are welcome
Composition+animation Test. here is the link of composition in the real short film, the animation is not the final but if you want to critique are welcome!
Here everybody! i have a question for you, which composition you most like?, why the question, because de forms that comes over his head gone be animated in 2d or 3d, but i want some suggestion of which look better, C&C over all are welcome
I think that since you made him be in 3d, it looks better for there to be 3d shapes behind him (I also like how they are all skewed in some way). I feel like the 2d ones just feel really flat, at least in contrast to the character.
I do like the 3d shapes the most. Thay creat an extra depth in that image and I really like the messed up perspective… But the 2d shapes would be cool as well because the there is a 3d character and a 2d background. It would creat a better contrast between those two worlds.
thanks for the comments! i think i gonna make the 3d forms or maybe a combination? i gonna try it…
Hi everyone!
There is another compositiong of my short film. i need decided which color i gonna used, but if you have some suggestion can be great! thanks
and finally this week i finish the animation! yeeyyyy… and in the beginning of the next year is the presentation wish me luck!
I do prefere the first and the last image. They do have the most amount of depth i guess
i like it !,its so refreshing to see this kind of style, and i think you doing great so far.
about your question,i prefer the third. cause the color very vibrant. and it will be suitable to your animation.
