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zokana
#3
Hi Sergey
The first one is nice with the fresh colours. But having there at least three different perspectives conveys photo pasting, even if its not the case, but lowering the first good impression a lot.
The second one … difficult to say anything since its showing a lady without much context. The white background doesnt tell more about her concerned expression. When looking at the piece as fashion drawing, id say that the drawing style is very accurate for that genre, the fashion style not so unusual and even as casual wear almost a bit provincial with those hiking socks under the boots and the short skirt under the camel hair jacket. The latter could look perhaps better when having correct leg proportions - the knee seems to be a tiny bit low, and the shape of the thighs above the knees outside suddenly rather stylised.(but the cut of the skirt should be refined imo, regardless of its length.) Other minor issues might be the slightly small hands and the flat top of the head (needing some loosely falling hair there, especially on a white BG, looking otherwise like cropped).
Hope you dont mind the critiques and its helpful somehow…
Cheers
Sem
#4
and what is wrong with the provincial. I did not want to do something which a lot of Fantasy with a bunch of wires …
What is bad white
http://api.ning.com/files/NWeBgDcQMoegC-fnLvFXLBJOXZllHSta7aNIkYBS8COdXic2s7NzaH4NEaVTBH4T9VtdVvtNSXEP0m2LkCefNDZodi-QLx/BATMAN_BATMAN.jpg
http://www.tvshowsondvd.com/graphics/news3/BatmanS2.jpg
thanks
zokana
#5
Provincial is cool concerning for example quality of living, but not so good concerning fashion style, when a picture is mainly about clothings. However, it would be nice to see more CG fashion illustrations.
Keep it up!
Sem
#6
t is the heroine of the story. She arrives at her aunt’s house …
really the hero must be wearing necessarily Tommy Hilfiger, Guci) this is a horror story.
zokana
#7
Oh, so it isnt a fashion illustration… (or wasnt, respectively 
) Nice would be to inform about the purpose of your pictures, instead of letting people guess and criticizing when someone was wrong while trying to be helpful. It doesnt need to be in proper English, but some info would be cool.
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