The Sky Beneath Our Feed / Crit please :)

#1

Hi!

This is basically my second time trying to matte paint, I’m still figuring out Photoshop but I’d really love any ciriticsm you can give me about this picture! It was a shot at the current mini challenge but I would rather use this as a learning experience.

But yeah, I’m not sure how to integrate two images into one yet. Not sure how to navigate the likes of stock photographs, things like that. I welcome any criticism, ideas and thoughts about my work.

Be brutal!! It helps me learn quicker.

https://66.media.tumblr.com/feca507bfd428984c360acfbe0789408/tumblr_o6pr2oAx1w1t898cyo1_540.jpg

Sorry about the link, the forum isn’t letting me add the image itself.

Thanks!!

#2

The building is torn down, borderline no no stone on stone, yet the add on it is completely intact, all 6 of them :smiley:
Althou after one finer inspection, it seems like those signs arent actually on building but on poles or whatever they are called.
This little confusion i had isn’t something good, you should try to adjusting them so they would be clearer.
Also they are very bright, its almost like they are the focus of the picture, while in reality i think that the mountain beam is. Or are they connected somehow? If not id suggest to tone down the sign color abit.

#3

You have very similar problems in your artistic development as Vladimir Gasai (Filthmaster), and what I posted in his thread applies to you as well:
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showpost.php?p=7937589&postcount=4