The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Stéphane Brouty


#321

Wow just loving the details here, nice proportions and attitude of this girl, very nice work !
continue comme ca c’est vraiment chouette :love:


#322

:thumbsup::scream: She is really comming nicelly! good job! :applause:


#323

This is realy great modelling dude.I’m also doing a female figure but I suck at organic stuff,so I’m going to look at your work for some guidens.If you know of a good tutorial please let me know.


#324

Morning all !

@ makaron : See you can’t remember too !! Bah even if we don’t know what it means , it’s still a funny word … I like those :scream:

@ coochaki : Thx man , more comes soon … I hope !

@ Squibbit : Hey Squib ! thx man ! yep something bothering me too but I can’t figure it too … Well I’m gonna tweak that now on pose so I hope I’m gonna fix it … thx man for droppin’ by !

@ agou : Hiyya La Sophinette !! Thx a lot , yeah they do are a bit short … I fixed that !

@ Vedic kings : Thx a lot mate !!

@ cipher : Thx a lot Seb !!

@ Climax : thx a lot Omar !!

@ SONIC-X : Thx a lot Corrie !! Well I don’t really know tutorials …
But without any arrogance or whatsoever I did an anatomy thread for my topology research on the anotamy forum maybe you can find something usefull there (despite all spams :scream: )
I used the exact same way to model that elf model …
Otherwise Stahlberg opened a thread on the female topology here
Hope it helps !

Ok finally I’ll con’inue this one for a while by rigging and posing and move to another one after that … yep that’s the plan !
Huge thx to all of you for your great support and kind words ! Have great day !

cheers ,

-Zapan


#325

Fantastic modeling Steph!:eek: Twisted work! she looks so good.

Keep up that standard:beer: It’s taking everybody on higher grounds!


#326

All your sketches and modelling is looking amazing! The body and proportions look great and the armour detailing is too good.:applause:

Something bothers me about her face, however, and somebody previously mentioned that she could look a bit more feminine as well. I think maybe perhaps part from the nose to her jaw seems a bit long, and her chin a little wide. It could be just the angle, since I didn’t notice it as much on the earlier shots…

Keep up the great work!:slight_smile:


#327

Thanks for the links dude.I have read through your hole anatomy thread and now I feel inspired to attempt modelling a figure for the challenge soon,I just have to get time to do a concept sketch first.

Thanks again.


#328

Wow!
really good modeling already beautiful!!:bowdown:


#329

Great job with your modeling. This sounds bad but her breast look a lot better now. This thread is almost as popular as 2d works. oh … and thxs for the anatomy thread.

See ya Later!


#330

Woaw the last update is amazing … the body and the clothing are both perfect
but why do modelize it together :smiley:
For the head, it seems to me that you are in the good way : elf have a more
elongated face than humans …

yes, a second elf now :slight_smile:


#331

C’est du bon modelling ça ! :wink:


#332

Great model! She’s really a beauty!


#333

Yoyoyoyoyyoyoyoyoyyo my friend :buttrock:

Really beautiful elf! So sexxxxxyyyyyy :love:
But some points IMO…

As Gpepper said the arms are a little too short, i find the nostril a little to high, rib cage is a little too much ahead and the breast area is too flat… on the profil vue especially…

Thats all :scream:
Keep it up the great work Steph :thumbsup:


#334

Gave her the pose …
Some areas are still a bit “bumpy” due to the skinning … Have to fix that …
Now I have to focus on the face and tweak it to gave her a sad expression … and then move to another character which I hope will be faster to create since I’m gonna use that same body mesh …

Let me know what you guys think of .

cheers ,

-Zapan


#335

Nyark! for that pose you earn a peanut… :stuck_out_tongue:

think she gonna be great when you fixed her face expression… :bounce:

and me faster than any snail… haha


#336

I think it looks good!


#337

Hi all , quickly here to post the evening update …

@ thierry2005 : Thx a lot Thierry , really glad you like her , thx for the kind words !

@ burpy : Hey mate , thx a lot , yep some issues you said have to be fixed … gonna take care of it soon !

@ SONIC-X : Hey Corrie , well I’m really glad you found something usefull there , thx a lot , and I just can’t wait to see your model ! …

@ tuck : Aaaahhh , zillions of thanks mate !

@ rasamaya : Ahah , thx man !

@ Schun : Thx a lot , aha , second one should start soon , some work on her still have to be done and then I’m gonna move to another one !

@ Ludal : Merci beaucoup !

@ medunecer : Thx a lot mate !

@ Poonks : Thx man , yep I tried to fix that with the pose , still have to tweak the face tho … Thx for crits …

I’m gonna make my spam session on your threads tomorrow … tonight I’m a bit zzz zzz zzz … Thx again everyone !

cheers ,

-Zapan

Edit : @ makaron : fast little blond GP !! :scream: thx for the peanut Mon’ !

@ Vedic Kings : Thx man !


#338

Hi Stéphane, just wanna tell you that this elf girl looks pretty nice! you’ve made a great work on the modeling! The next characters will be way faster to model for sure :wink:
Keep it up and good luck man :thumbsup:


#339

man this is good…i really dont see that “bumpy” thing u said, i see it very good…but youre the master:thumbsup:

about the pose i see a bit strange the feet posture…seems like that way she cant handle her weight, but maybe this is just because the camera angle…you rocking dude:buttrock:


#340

stunning work mate- really super impressive!