this is great SideAche! Love the composition. Its working quite well. I love how the little yellow car has a smiley face
The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Cliff Cramp
Hi Cliff, cool stuff here! This makes me look forward to Pixar’s Cars even more!!! Is it coming out this year? The underside of the bigger cyan-coloured car… shouldn’t there be some light showing under it too according to perspective? I could be wrong though. I like your painting style! All the best with this one!
Wonderful concept idea! Simply love the way you mix realism and cartoon style.
Though I must agree with jeromoo there should bee light shining trough underneath the car.
Could give a nice siluett of the mice drivers and make them stand out more to I feel.
wow this is new, so well done too!
this is looking really special now. Very accomplished and very clear. I love the details too, like the reflection just in front of the mouse car. definitely one of my favourites. good luck.
Coming along nicely, Cliff. I like the lighter (again) underside area on the car, I think it reads more believably. Nice turquoise touches on the side of the red Mini, hope you’ll keep going with those. And the mouse poses - I didn’t get to comment earlier but they all look great. Looking good, and plenty of time left to refine it more. Great work!
Oh, and one question: If that is actually your car, is one of the pilots you?
No, they’re just made up. I put someone that resembles me in the other Mini illustration and I caught some slack for it from my buddies. Thanks for the FB
hahahahaha cool:) idea is funny.characters and perspective looks awsome!car is greate
the mice car idea really rocks, stick to it, please!
Hahaha, very cute piece here! I like the idea very much! It feels very french for some reason! haha Keep on going with the colouring!
this is looking great man, improvements every time. I like the little mouse putting the rope on the front of the car, nice idea =) one sharp turn though and those mice are gunna fly =O
This looks great - I especially like the headlights - If I had to change something I would add more warmth to the shadows underneath the car, or maybe just lighten it up to highlight the mice more - and once again, well done.
Hey Cliff, really fun neat image – very good work! The ears of the second mouse from the right look a bit funny…? Colors are great…kind of capture a 70s photo feel. Good luck!
Hi! Very cute idea! In my view it’s one of the best which I saw. I can
envy courage of these small mice. It’s a pity they are devoid of
an opportunity to travel independently. Good luck!
very cool idea! am impressed with your ingenuity and execution. great work…
He He He …great work Cliff
Not sure if the journey will be a long one, but should be one hell of a ride!!
Love the style and characters, especially details such as mouse pulling rope taught…
I have corrected the issues with the older mouse with the race schedule in his hands. Thanks for the FB.