The Great Escape, Tomasz Jedruszek (2D)


#13

This is really striking! I love the textures and colours. You have a really dynamic style.

Great work!


#14

Another masterpiece as usual! :slight_smile:

Indeed, I love the dynamic style and interesting palette as well. Actually I like this work more that the earlier one - here are some noticeable improvements as it were. Great lighting and the touch of reddish tones was a brilliant idea!
I also like the idea of this agent story-line in this paint, but I’d rather chose a different pose for the woman. She seems too calm and classy even though the given circumstances. Therefore the foreground elements don’t seem so coherent to the background parts - like a later addition to the concept, as a matter of my opinion…

How long did it take to execute this paint for you?

Keep it up and congratz’ for the FP! :thumbsup:


#15

Great work!! I love it!


#16

Great!!! Love the reflections and colors in general


#17

Kablaaaaammm :wip:
Pieces of wood all over the place! I like most in that picture those two ships shooting each other.


#18

Great momentums!!I like it!!


#19

Great work!!
Best regards, Selwy


#20

Beautiful. Very nicely done.


#21

If this is a collage then maybe I’m being over critical…

But the image has 3 focal points that do not mix to me.

  1. The large waves in the background

vs.

  1. The naval battle

vs.

  1. A row boat with two somewhat relaxed looking people.

I like your art work, but the composition and action do not fit well.

Can you really have a sea battle in a massive storm, and can you row a boat in a massive storm without being tied down? And wouldn’t the woman be stricken with fear, and holding on for dear life?

These are just questions… A friendly critique, I’m not trying to be an ass, better to ask about percieved flaws then to ignore them.

Mike
IMC 2010 student


#22

fantastic job . liked the mood and the details

keep it up


#23

very good colours choice.I like it very much!!


#24

This is really a splendid piece of work Tomasz. Are you familiar with the work of Geoff Hunt?

The only crits I have is:

  1. As previously mentioned in this thread, the lady looks like she’s enjoying a lovely Sunday afternoon on a calm lake.

  2. The gentleman rowing the boat is facing the wrong way (must be a landlubber?). Very hard to row a boat facing forward especially in such seas.

  3. The jolly boat doesn’t look quite symmetrical. Very difficult to steer an asymmetrical boat :slight_smile:

The warships and sea are very well done though!


#25

Thats a really nice painting!
The woman seems really out of place though. She seems way to calm considering she might be thrown overboard by the next big wave! hehe


#26

Great work!


#27

Hi Tomasz! Thats really convincing me. Such a great feeling. Thank you very much for sharing!


#28

v.g0o…o0d man :eek:


#29

impressive!!! I am wondering did you use any type of photo reference, or is this all right out of your head??? either way it is phenomenal… love when people do water right…


#30

amazing light effects! so skillful way to paint the big scene!
bravo~


#31

Stunning work!


#32

[left]You did it again! Wonderful!!!
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