the first post on CGtalk,<<fallen angel>>

#1

Photo shop6.0+mouse. just for practise,the character in this picture is a hollywood star,I used her pic with out a permision.so,NOT FOR COMMERCAIL USE.

#2

I would like anyone give me a critical suggestion.I feel that this work do have somekind of defact.

#3

This looks real nice!
The BG is very blurred and without much definition in relation to the models head, but I guess thats going to come…?
And is she supposed to be androgynous or have you censored it?
I might consider taking away the demons arms and just hint to the demons body…
Im looking fwd to see this finished, looks very promising;)

#4

I thank you for your suggestion.the model and the BG was drawed seperated on two levels at first.so the relationship is week.But I don’t understand that why you say it’s androgynous.that’s interesting.

#5

You rendering on the face is perfect. :love: You have to bring the rest of the pix up to that same level. Not really that much else to say, it’s just a question of putting a few more hours worth of work into the pix. You have the basics down and obviously have the skill to make a great picture.

I think “Danisud” said androgenous because she has no niples but has what "looks "to be breasts. It’s a bit distracting. I’d put them in.

#6

you are right,It seems need a little more work,I would do that.And about the niples ,I will add.

#7

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