The Farmer and Thief comic (LONG)

#1

Hello, I’m doing a style study for an animation so I’ve decided to turn it into a comic to start with. Would like a critique on the pacing and story. :bounce:

Any critiques welcome. It’s a fairly long comic but I hope it’s readable for you :slight_smile: Some poses aren’t that great, it’s just a draft. If you can be honest that’d be appreciated. I’m not compromising on anything at this point :slight_smile: Thanks in advance!

Page1
https://www.dropbox.com/s/0co3i29kz75mj5m/FT_Comic_DRAFTV1_P1.jpg

Page2
https://www.dropbox.com/s/b0g617x0pdbj8kk/FT_Comic_DRAFTV1_P2.jpg

#2

The two strips of images you uploaded are so tiny that I can’t really see clearly what is going on in them.

#3

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