Tabletop Project, Glen Gramling (3D)


#1

Title: Tabletop Project
Name: Glen Gramling
Country: United States
Software: Maya

This is a student table top project, and its pretty much the first fully rendered scene ive done, so i need lots of criticism.


#2

Wellll. Maya is my favourite tool-good choice.
try to make metalic surfaces more shine using glow and its treshold atribute
-the desk is little bumpy for me
-you can use some dirt textures to make the shaders look realistc
-and maybe some mentalray could help to light the scene

But keep trying-and be patient. Nice work


#3

I think the scene might look a little better if it had more contrast of shades, and colours. Pretty much everything is really dark.


#4

i posted an update, the table texture is fixed, i also added depth of feild, and fixed the pipe


#5

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