SWAT breach Concept


#1

Could use some advice on this, thanks in advance!


#2

Is this a WIP or a finished piece? You put your signature on it, so I’m assuming it’s finished.

As a piece of finished painting, I think it’s a bit too rough and needs a lot more refinement, so your shapes, forms, facial expression, hand gestures, etc. are much more readable. Right now, many areas of this image looks like a rough sketch and not a finished painting. This has nothing to do with whether the brushwork is loose or tight, clean or expressive. It has to do with readability. It’s possible to create expressive brushwork that’s still very readable.