Sunrise In Venice, Carlos Serrano (3D)

#9

Great work!

2 crits:

  1. The street on the left corner of the screen could need a better texture.

  2. The fog seems a little strange.

Other than that, it’s awesome, really!

#10

Thanks to everybody for the critics and comments. I will take note of them.
:slight_smile:

#11

Wonderful, i only miss the caustics from the lower level of the front side wall. It would give the image motion.

#12

really awesome work!!I love it!

another minor point: I get the impression that I can see the ground behind the water in the foreground, (I dont know if this is just a my impression or you made it so) this looks a bit strange because:

  1. in venice’s canals, water is greenish and dirty so you cannot see the ground (your seems fresh clean water)
  2. water level is much higher than that…

anyway this is great job for sure!keep it up! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#13

hi oblivionblack, what you see, really are the stones of the water. But the reason of that is just artistic, esthetic, cause i have never been in Venice, but i wanted to give it my style. Of course, it could be better.

Thanks !!!:):slight_smile:

#14

This is amazing I totally love the lighting. But still you could add some interesting details on the ground close to the camera. Some small grass between the tiles or and insect on the tube would add more charm to this illustration.

#15

nice one! :thumbsup:

#16

i dont like the sky looks so flat

#17

Aww, if the water were not so shallow I would dive inside it! Heehee!!
Wonderful soft image. I love it.

mG

#18

Good Work man! :slight_smile: i like textures

#19

I still do not go to Venice , but these works are personally on the scene by me ! Too beautiful , the quiet surrounding feeling of soft sunlight all lets me be fascinated .The qualitative use of material is also very apt .The small suggestion : The camera is given some angles toward the left again , and the street lamp modelling probably can be more perfect . Learn to you ! Be infatuated with the country in the civilization …:thumbsup:

#20

good work . nice rendering .

good luck

#21

When you see something like that you became…speechless!:smiley:

Great work on texturing&lightning :thumbsup:

#22

:slight_smile: Hi.
Your concieving power is good and you done a nice job,
:thumbsup: Lighting is fine.
:slight_smile: Modeling is perfect.
:slight_smile: Sky is natural, sometime its flat don’t worry.
:thumbsup: Really awesome composition…

:love: Carry on I love to watch this image…

#23

a la Sequier my friend…love it

one crit only:the closer ground’s texture is to small…put a big resolution one

my opinion

cool stuff

#24

I’ve actually walked past this spot. Pretty cool. Thanks for the memory.

#25

well done… may be water could hv had more realistic look…

#26

Mapping on the buildings is really nice,lightning too…but…materials such as that chain and those ornaments on the railing look kinda “plastic”…and that water looks kind of odd…bump map too strong in down left corner…
But like you wrote, it’s your artistic approach and from that perspective I think it’s really great…

:slight_smile:

#27

Ah, Venice…

This picture makes me wanting to do go to venice for a vacation.

#28

Beautiful Scene. Lighting is Very nice. :slight_smile: