Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Renan Rodrigues Moura Nuche

#17

a character design for the last concept…

#18

I like your Cyclops design – You have a real knack for sketching engaging, relatable characters. I guess that’s why your original tree idea probably wouldn’t have worked (aside from the tree p*nis issue); your dogs were so endearing and sad that it just produces that wrongity-wrong feeling to imagine them being peed on :sad:

This latest concept is a cool one. There are an abundance of stories where people get sucked into books; there are virtually none where they’re being regurgitated out.

Maybe you could bring the dragon further into the composition though? He’s just kind of on his own up in that corner; if you pulled him further to the left you’d not only be able to show him off better, but have him more involved in the scene by having his wing intersect with the silhouette of the cyclops.

Good start, man, keep pushing :thumbsup:

#19

chrisbeaver - thanks for the very construtive critiques…I agree with every word.

#20

one more for the fantasy book concept…

#21

Wow! Your scketch rocks! Very good!

Cheers,
Carlos

#22

opa…mais um brasileiro…thanks man!

#23

Great concepts! Your style rocks!

#24

one more…

#25

thanks Essen!

#26

Very cool sketches.

The one with the dog in the microwave is upsetting. :sad: The chefs look cool. :slight_smile:

#27

another character for the fantasy book concept…I changed the concept a little …I’ll make some thumbnails and explain it later…

#28

thanks ekah

#29

Great sketches man! I really liked the cyclops and your concept of fairies :thumbsup: I can´t wait to see your final idea. Saludos y suerte!!

#30

Nice, man. I am waiting to see the colors.
Com a pintura, vão parecer bonecos em 3D. :slight_smile:

#31

some very quick sketches…there is a little story behind which a I’ll explain later…crits are welcome

#32

Ferx…thanks a lot man!

Anatomista…thanks!..vc eh membro da central neh?..então kra…acho q nesse ilustração vou fazer uma pintura mais parecida com pintura tradicional…mas vamos ver no q da…vlw pelo comentário!

#33

really cool sketches. cant wait to see more of your work. excellent work. keep it up, best of luck. ill be stalking you.

#34

Slav…thanks for the nice words!

#35

I really like the motion in your sketches. Nice flowing lines. I’m looking forward to learning the story…

#36

insted of use all types of characters from fantasy storys…I think I’ll do only the fairies attacking the guy…I think it’s more strange fairies going crazy than creatures or warriors that’s already known as agressive…

my english is killing me…I hope you are understanding the things I’m writing