Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Corey Loving

#2

First concept idea of a monster being afraid of a little girl.

#3

It’s very cool :slight_smile: Great pose, and a wonderful creature design. The only issue is that Pixar kinda beat you to the idea; it might cost you originality points in the end… :hmm: I’d suggest another variation on the theme, like the monster doing prop-comedy, but Monsters’ Inc. did that too in the end…

As long as you keep the style as far as possible from Pixar’s you might be okay, but I suggest brainstorming other ideas just in case.

#4

Good point that Chrisbeaver has given you. It’s great to have you aboard Corey. Good luck. I am interested in seeing how well you’ve improved.:thumbsup:

#5

yo corey :smiley: :thumbsup:

#6

Nice. Would be better if the face of the girl would be visible , with a very very cute expression … for the contrast , you know :D. Keep it up.

#7

hi mate… love your work. i think this idea is excellent but unfortunatly chrisbeaver made a very good point. on such a high profile idea it might indead ost originaity points. ver big shame as this idea could make a stunning image.

#8

Great start Corey, I’ll check in again soon!

#9

AHAHHAHAH I love it!

#10

ahaha :smiley: this is wonderful! Love the concept and the line work.

Good luck!

#11

Concept of monster having a tea party with little girls in their room. How strange.

#12

Oooh! I like this latest one… it’s hilarious! How about making the little girls victorian style women gently advising the monster on the proper way to hold his finger, but his little finger is webbed to the next one? Having it with little girls might be too fantasy-land-like, looks much more like strange behaviour when you have the adults in there??

#13

Ahahha great sketch too but I prefer the “corner” one :thumbsup:

#14

oh god that made me laugh. good one corey. love the last update. keep up the great work.

#15

Strong concepts and great sketches!

#16

Hi, Good sketches! saw this and got an idea of a twist. Just thought what will happen if its a small monster and an overgrown kid, really beefy chubby girl but still qute having tea?

Keep it up!

#17

hehe…nice concept and sketch!

#18

Hey Corey, really nice sketches and idea. I like more your second one concept. :smiley: Great work with your sketches! Good luck, and keeping and eye in the progress of your idea :thumbsup:

#19

I like the idea, but I’m not too crazy about your monster design or your sketches. I think the proportion and perspective needs quite a bit of work, and I think you’ll need to come up with a more interesting and somewhat frightening monster design. As of now it is really lacking any structure and personality. Good luck Corey !

#20

I prefer the corner image - much more dramatic. Good work!

Gord

#21

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