still: Abandoned Place


#1

Hi, this my last render

c&c are welcome !!!
The Hi-res version is here :http://perso.wanadoo.fr/spigaou/images/hangar_full.jpg


#2

really love the textrue & lighting…
somehow i feel the man there is 2d. am i right?
great work…


#3

This looks awsome!
Very well done!
Maybe add more junk. Like torn papers, old newspapers and so on. I mean, since there are bottles in there, there might aswell be other stuff.
Great work anyways


#4

WOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW !! Great !!


#5

that is some phenominal lighting…

incredible image, but my apartment has a mattress in the corner…heh,
anyway,
seems like the door is the exact same size as the window next to it, and that dude must be really short.


#6

Deja Vu to me…


#7

Hey, good render you have there

I like the lighting, the textures are great and the overall composition of the piece is well done.

The bottles look a bit odd, maybe too solid…i’d also add a few broken bottles. Adding, booze and a large concrete empty space…somethings going to break :stuck_out_tongue:

-Gav


#8

Wow I really like the atmosphere…

But as mentioned before: The proportion of the person, door and window don’t look correct though.


#9

excellent lighting


#10

Hey, thank you for yours coments !!!

Sir_Manfred > you’re right, add more junk will be better but… i’m lazy…

xsilentpepe > deja vu ??? where ???

Dareoner > merci pour ton petit mot ça me fait d’autant plus plaisir que je suis un grand fan de ce que tu fais et des prod de spe6men.


#11

Really really nice man, i like the hole in the roof. The pic brings up a lot of questions, whats the man doing there? is he meting someone? This is good in art but u might can give a bit more of that free. What was your idea behind the scene, why is it a man that is dressed up good?

Though i must agree with what has been noticed, the man looks real 2d and the window is a bit out of proportion, maybe you shouldve made a smaller window witch has been closed with wood…

Real nice texturing/ modeling job, congrats!


#12

GOOOOD RENDER! what do you use for make the render? and what do you use for make this light? congratulations !


#13

wow, very nice:thumbsup:

i love the volumetric lights… i agree with the others that adding a few things in there would be really nice. things like barrels and old tires.

how long did it take to render? specs?


#14

Wow, Im totally amazed, really excellent work!! :buttrock: :buttrock:
I love the texturing, especially grafitti wall!!

T_M


#15

very good image…
adding more elements will look more detailed…

what render is that?


#16

Thank you everybody…
I use Maya 5 and a mix of mental ray (with GI and final gathering) and maya software (for volumetric).
About 20mn for the main passe.

For $imon > yess i try to make an image with a mysterious feeling and the spectator is totaly free about the sense…

And ok, i’ll try to add more details in the next render…:slight_smile:


#17

amazing work.


#18

Very great render !!!:thumbsup:


#19

Very VERY nice. The feel the looks are incredible. :thumbsup:


#20

i like your image a lot…the mood the light…excellent!