Hi, i like the composition pose and color, little suggestion ofcause i know this is just only your
concept, having some gold color pattern and red cloth on the spear will be nicer.
for the pose of handling spear right, the way this character holding it is abit weird, looks like she going to throw the spear. i have search for a reference for you, maybe you can consider about it. 
Thanks for your opinion guys. I’m currently looking at other possible poses and composition for my final picture. Personally i think the composition still lacks the dramatic element. I will get it on picture now:) :buttrock:
Hi stylize,
i like your composite very well.
The colors are great, also the perspective is.
I always try to get some like this but always end up"straight" 
Good luck to you.
Greets rasher73
The character and concept, story all are gr8…Really love those Rings as GEAR WHEELS :surprised
Good Luck!
Nice layout! I feel can be stronger by giving it a more dynamic look. But i not sure how to go about describing the dynamic look. But like more curves and more swirls in the layout. Jiayou!
U have enhance the pose of Nezha and its look more nicer than the previous one. :bowdown:
I notice a few things, maybe some little suggestions. I noticed the eye of the dragon is too close to the edge of composition, resulting a bit tangent uncomfortability so move him into the left a bit might helps. The middle part of the Dragon tail seems to be in an uncomfortable composition with Nezha and as well the upper right of the screen, is becoming a bit heavy on lower left and empty on upper right, maybe can try to have lesser visual on the screen for the middle tail part. I am just trying to help out with the composition, hopefully u can achieve perfect for a great piece of artwork.
Well deserved praise on your effort and challenges, Gambate:buttrock:
Great concepts work. I agree I like the larger dragon it makes for a more david vs goliath scenario.
JackZhang Thanks for dropping by:) Good luck to you as well bro:)
wildcory1 Thanks. I like the larger dragon too:)
Hey bro,
I love the idea and design of Nezha! Just some comments on the composition, with regards to the dragon in particular, which I hope you will find it helpful:
I agree with hangkwong about needing more “curves” in the composition. You can do that by making use of the dragon’s body. In fact if you have not finalised the concept for the dragon, I’d suggest you can use elements from the chinese mythological dragon. They have long and slender body that swirls around. Make his body swirls round nezha more, such that the whole situation will look more intense and more “life threatening” to Nezha. At the moment, it gives me the impression that this dragon is not fierce enough, and so there’s a lack of tension in the situation. You can also fill up more of the empty spaces by making the dragon swirls a few more rounds, around Nezha.
I suggest you show the claws of the dragon. Not only will that give you more elements to play with for the composition, it will also make it more threatening to Nezha and create more tension. Also open his mouth wider, the idea is to make him look more fierce and more offensive.
At the moment, Nezha has a very distinctive oriental style but not so for the dragon. So I think using a chinese mythological dragon will also help to enhance its look and feel. It will make the whole theme looks tighter.
Hope the suggestion help!
hi, Vincent Lim.
great concept as well as modeling.
I like the final, but the one in the middle is not bad in terms of the layout.
cheers.
kenTHEman Hi there! It has been quite some times since i see you:) Thanks for the comments. I agree with point number 2 having the scene more life threatening. Actually I use the dragon as a placeholder. I will turn that dragon to a more steampunk junk look rather than a fleshy chinese dragon:p About having more swirls… hmm… i don’t know about that becos it may look kinda messy in the scene? haha i will put in down on paper to test it out:)
paratrooper Thanks for dropping and giving me some comments:) I don’t understand which middle you are refering to:P Can you please elaborate:P Anyway your entry look really cool!!
i paintover some costume design… personally i like the most right costume 
how do u guys feel?
yoooo bitchent !!
love the no.2 and 3 design dude…
looking good so far… keep fockus man !! hahaha…
Yo Vicenzo, I am certainly going for the 3rd design. The costume I feel had to Goddess and elegance, that’s mean a lot of details in the costume especially the colour variation. Go Go Go!:buttrock:
Thanks for the support guys! 
I’m still working on the overall composition and working on the costume at the same time. Seems like this constant changes are going crazy:argh: But i guess thats the fun part, trying to make the best out of it:)
cheers guys
Nice work so far. I don’t have a choice between the three, it depends on the girly touch you want to add or not to your character
