Carl, Henrik, Nelson, Shawn, Lefteris and Roman: thank you guys.
Just when I was thinking it was a bit quiet here, all this great feedback.
Henrick and Nelson, really good points. Thanks for looking with such clear eyes.
I shall play around with the placement of David. The character of ‘The Controller’ is beginning to grow in my mind and on paper, and I might try something more with him, but I quite like the way this is going, so I will take it further.
Shawn, it’s a tough one about controlling which elements are dominating. My initial idea is to bring this powerful symbol of industrialism into a sort of Dickensian slum. I want to keep a focus on character as it is the only thing that might possibly distinguish my work from all these amazing mech modelers and wonderfully dynamic images.
Thanks again. I’ll get more stuff up over the weekend.