Łukasz Matuszek is entered in the “Steampunk Myths and Legends” update: View Challenge Page
Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Łukasz Matuszek
Hi Łukasz!
I think that your idea of the ship has really big potential. I’m waiting for updates 
Good Luck!
I love the concept.
I actually had something similar in mind with the Titanic initially, but i´m glad i gave it up.
Yours look a lot better already. 
I have added some details,
Part of the ship is now more precise
I think composition reamians uchanged now, but who nows 
hey lukas,
i like the mood and the two figures looking on in the foreground. careful you get the small elipses of the lamp part in the street lantern right in perspective, i think the lantern as such is leaning a bit.
and one design aspect of the otherwise cool zeppelin thing is that i think it would be better if the big chimneys would not puff out directly to the balloon belly so closely, but maybe go around it a bit more…just suggestions though 
all the best with this!
Jan
Thanx for comment.
Sure, the lamp have bad perspective and chimneys are reaching to high. but i have some ideas.
soon next update .
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.

