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Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Krzysztof Rusinek
Hey man! Good stuff on here! I like the chariot concept! Maybe push the values a bit on it though? The steam-details (cylinders on the side and such) are very dark compared to the side of the chariot… if you’d pop ‘em a bit, I’m guessin’ the concept will read a lot more clear! Just a suggestions though… like I said… I dig the concept 
Hope you don’t feel I’m bashing your stuff, but I have a little crit on the storyboards too 
All the frames are composed like 50/50… the subject matter is almost dead centre in all of 'em… might make for more dynamic shots if you rethink the compositions.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this!!
Good luck!
dC
Nice model, man! I’m not a 3d modeler myself, but it looks awesome! Gonna be cool to see it with the different materials!
dC
Looks good man! I like the crosover with the ancient chariot and the modern bike tire 
Thanks a lot - still needs some modelling upgrades and texturing. Update soon - another model in progress. Thinking about main character and fx solutions for fire and sun…
good, good, I’ve seen some hourses around here, but you’re most steampunk, nice machinery feel. One thing, it looks mroe like a ponytail because of it’s proportions, as it was said before it’s adorable, if that is as intended than great. Waiting to see more 
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