Hey all thanks for the feedback… it really helps. Next stage once I get this girl right will be painting in all the tentacles and eyes… then some background to give scale. I was thinking some village houses in the background showing a trail of destruction. It’s not very clear at the moment but the perspective will be kind of top down. The girl really needs to change for this. Then I’ll paint in all the little details like engraving and switches, wear and tear etc. I still have to finish Hermes and the Saber… and then I’ll add all the effects.
And I only have half a day put aside to do it… ahhhhhhgh!!
guterrez - hey thanks so much for your feedback… yeah I agree the girl needs to be more dynamic… bracing herself with hair flying. And no I dont use any 3D cheers!
JackZhang - Thank you! Im definately going to change the girl, cheers for the feedback
RTjunior - thanks
authentic - cheers!
lioration - Thanks for the crit… yeah the sword cuts the robots head off… which at present isnt very clear… but it will be!.. oh yes it will I’m also planning on having a light trail coming from the blades. I usually do most of my effects at the very end so as not to complicate the painting too early. Thanks!
Roger Nobs - Wow thanks, I like your entry too
balloontree - Thanks very much. I’m planning on making things much clearer but want to get everything in the right place first. there’s nother worse that painting in all those effects and then realising you have to change the composition.