Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Jaroslaw Switalski

#9

I added tower - one of many Im going to put in this image

Finaly I can say something about the legend I was trying to make - King Arthur’s city:)

#10

Yeah… imperial athmosphère !!!

#11

next WIP - I added part of the city

#12

NICE MOOD…:thumbsup:

#13

tnx man!

Next WIP - added ship obviusly flying:) Soon I will updadte it with wings

#14

added next part of the city Camelot - also Im experimenting here with some details - smoke. This dark part on the bottom of the image is just for now - i will fill it with some details

#15

this is a nice concept :slight_smile: il be looking forward to your updates

#16

Thanks man it nice to hear that

#17

Awesome concept man. Cant believe how fast some of you guys work.

#18

thanks man - Im fast becouse of two reasons: 1 this is not difficult concept. 2 I have no job now so spending 14 hours a day working day and night is avilable for me:)

#19

hey man this is allready pretty dobre! :cool:

i guess that means good but its already a bit better!

really nice mood and the simplicity really doesnt show.

bad thing you got no job but as long as you get food to survive its way to go!

#20

It’s really cool, but maybe some small clues to let us know that it’s Camelot? Maybe the statue wears a crown? Or somewhere we can see the sword in the stone or the lady in the lake? I think there’s all kind of little clues you could work in here and there.

#21

oneandonlyDiscoStu: haha i have food but not for long, u speak good polish:)

Mercuralis: that is really true, i am still thinkg about how to make it more Camelot - I have still more than 50 days to finish:)

#22

HI Jarek,

Great concept man.
Right now I got a bit a impression there is no really fore, middle and background;Maybe a little boat near us could bring in a bit more depth as there already is.
My 2 cents ofcourse.
Good luck mate!

#23

Thanks man - yes i see to - Im going to make it looks more 3d juest after adding one flying machine and painting in photoshop.

#24

after looking at it and looking for some wrong things i guess the only thing i can find is the thickness of the arm pointing upwards. it looks like the lower arm is thicker than upper part at the beginning. maybe wanna check that out.
i agree with a little 2d feeling but im sure youll fix that. and i hope youll do so without loosing the painterly touch you have achieved really nicely so far.
im guessing an awefull lot of depth of field or so could be a killer to that

#25

no stary… nie obijaj sie gdzie jakis update ? :stuck_out_tongue:
kiedy mnie odwiedzisz w celu nauki maxa…
btw jestem krewny ci kebaba :smiley:
peace

#26

wow it just keeps getting better and better :slight_smile:

#27

wow nice concept man…keep it up…good luck.

#28

oneandonlyDiscoStu: thanks for tip, i will look at this

LukeZ: sorry:) I gave my self few days free for palying … ArmA:):slight_smile:

Cyberone: thank u very much:)

ryancoy: thanks nice to hear that:)