Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Fabricio Moraes

#141

Thanks everyone for the great feedback.
I liked what Ballo said. I did Geppetto a very odd old man. Maybe his invention won´t last long, but he is trying. hehehe

Thanks again, people. It´s good to know you are liking my work and your comments are helping me to do better.

More updates soon.

#142

great progress so far, keep it up

#143

this is allready looking really great. Great lighting scenery composition…Looking forward to see it finished. one thought perhaps, I miss a little bit of specular high lights in Gepetto eyes behind his glasses.

:thumbsup:

#144

Great concept and modeling. Perfect in every way. My only suggestive comment is that the copper tones of the steampunk character blends in with the table a little maybe a little more contrast. Just a thought

#145

Looks very beautiful… Nearly final isn’t it ?

#146

Oh, what a cool and interesting work, coming along great :wink:

#147

Excellent work on the shading and lighting!
I like the expression in his face, particularly!
Good luck!
:slight_smile:

#148

this is fantastic.

i think the tube between robot and machine looks too light in a way. I would expect it to relax more on the table and look more heavy.

the design of it all is great. very awesome. :applause:

#149

This is a post production test made based on the render I posted before, so I didn’t fix the reflections of Pinocchio, Geppetto’s specular and other textures. Still needs a lot of tweaking like fog and steam, contrast and tones.

#150

i love the way your work communicates with the viewer :love: plus the colors are pleasing too! :stuck_out_tongue:
for pinocchio’s eyes … how about a subtle streak effect …

http://www.core77.com/blog/fila_combust.jpg

http://neatorama.cachefly.net/images/2007-02/light-bulb-burning-out.jpg

this one is pretty strong … but it’ll give you an idea of a ‘burning’ bulb :wink:

http://www.diylive.net/wp-content/burning_bulb.jpg

all in all … amazing entry!! :buttrock: the finished piece will be a knockout!

good luck dude! :thumbsup:

#151

Wow… very nice update! Now we are talking! Fantastic level of detail… the hair in Gepetto´s arm turned out great.

Definitely the best entry so far! This time you get the chalenge and the publication in one of the Ballistic´s publications… wanna make a bet? :beer:

#152

Cadinho , you mad!
I have just posted the update and you already replied!
Thanks for the complimment.
I don’t believe I could win this chalenge since there are so much great entries, but I would be very happy if I get a Ballistic publication :smiley:

#153

Very Very Inspiring work…Well done.!:applause:

#154

very nice mood. Well done!

#155

I think the smoke is a tad bit too strong, and that area is too blurry. The blurrieness works with the mechanic or Mr G. Its seperates him from the background nicely.

#156

great hair!!

#157

Hi Fabricio, i really like your rendering, and the setting really have a strong mood, but just a little own worthless suggestion here, maybe the metal part look abit too shiny or reflective?

But anyway this is a good piece of artwork. good luck man. :applause:

#158

This is just getting better and better! Totally impressed! :applause:

#159

Incredible! Awesome! I’m baffled!! You really did improve a LOT just by giving little touches here and there! I sure hope Cadinho is right and you get a publication. The final piece is going to be a serious competitor in this challenge! Best of luck!!

#160

Wow!! That is a beautifull picture you got there. Models, lighting, everything looks great.