Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Elena Pigareva

#61

Sincerly, I don’t know what you don’t like with this ship… just maybe the tones doesn’t have enough contrast with the background (also due to the small size in the composition)…
you can certainly play just with lighting, and to keep anyway the blue mood… just as only borders was affected by a little part of the orange_yellow lighting…
…do you see what I mean ?

or maybe this ship only need to be a little bit more closer… with just it lower part with a more rich lighting…
…there’s certainly many solution to try… but in any case, why not a monoplane… even if I like much the deisgn of your steampunk ballon :thumbsup:

…and I wish you a merry christmas :wise:

#62

I really like this.A real depth and great richness to it.

I like the dirigible has a nice quirkiness to it.

#63

Not enough contrast? Mmm … I thought it was too much of it and my balloon distracted attention from the boy and his fish. I guess it its shape made not correct, but maybe lighting too. I am not sure if I inderstand your comment about light.
Ok, this is not a main thing in the picture, so I will work on it later.
Thanks for suggestions!

Merry Christmas to you too!! :slight_smile:

#64

Thanks. :slight_smile:

#65

i like it very much./the concept/
but i still has stange filling with the prespective?

#66

Hi! :slight_smile:
Where exactly?

#67

Looks beautiful. Really great atmospheric work.

#68

Thanks. Glad you liked it :slight_smile:

#69

Working on right part of background.

#70

Closeups

#71

Nice detailing… no probs…

and sorry to be late here, to answer to the your question, about my vision of you ship !

In first, I’m a bit sorry to discover it disappear…
and this is an example how I saw its integration… for me, it was not too much distrating in your composition… I think un your creation there’s many plans, many steps to discover the world of your image…
… In first, of course it’s the story wich could be saw… but after, start the great travel inside all the details of your picture… not ?

#72

nice and strange work CuriousLobster.
at this stage of your creation, you dont need advice, just finish it in the way you feel !

#73

very nice. prespective seems to be off just a bit. but I dont mind, I think it works well. good job!

#74

I worked on trees and grass. Also I added a few lilliputians. They are just rough sketches so far, but anyway there is a little curious girl and a man on a bike, maybe her father, near tracks. And there is a couple of lovers on a bridge. I have a problem with them. I put them on the bridge, then removed, then put on a roof and didn’t like it either, returned to the bridge, but I still don’t like how they look there. I don’t know what the problem is, maybe colors, maybe I should change their poses.
Tell me what you think.
Comment are very welcome.

#75

great mood Lena! I liked the dreamy like atmosphere here. keep it up :slight_smile:

#76

Lilliputians are closer.

#77

maybe put the couple off center

#78

Nope. It didn’t help. I tried. Thanks.

#79

Thanks :slight_smile:

#80

I didn’t remove it permanently and it will appear in a time :slight_smile:
Thanks for suggestions.