3d-empire,Neeno, david.mig,funkyboss,Crying Horn, gwhite206, tuck - Thanks guys.
SILMAETH - I tried to mix up the textures a little more like you suggested. Thanks for the crit.
gardogg - man I was hoping no one would remember the glow I’m not sure how I’m going to do it. Probably post in Photoshop if I can get that to look good. Any advice would be really cool.
Atris - Yeah, I feel like I could have done a much better job on the bricks and how they make up the castle. I did do some work on the textures and I think that helps a bit. Thanks for the crit.
mmoir - Good point. yeah the styles are very different. I kind of wanted that, so that there would be a very metal “form follows function” lower half and then the upper area, where the officers stand, is all wood and nice and fancy. In much the same way as the old sailing ships where the back of the ship where the captain lived had big windows and crazy carvings but the sides were all business. Thanks for the feedback.
Rivendale - man, great points. Can I just say I don’t have time to make any more changes
-I tried more guys up front. I had a guy breaking his spear and all, but it drew the attention down to the front of the image. I showed it to my fiance and she agreed. It looked cool but I thought that it hurt the image overall.
- I’ll try the guy falling if I have time
- Arrows in the thing is a cool idea. I was originally going to give the guys bows. Maybe I can quickly mix it up a little?
- Motion Blur is in now.
- I’m going to add the smoke and stuff in post I think
- I added white paint to the wood areas. Good point.
- Uggh, you’re right, I’m just too tired to do it I should though.
Great feedback guys. Thanks for all the help. I’ll have something up really soon.