Spectacular 3D Entry: Antone Magdy (Tony)

#61

ar LutiK : I want you to crit my work Iam not felling bad its okay :thumbsup:
your crits is right ,and yeah I need ref ,thanks for helping :bounce:

#62

Great start Tony, didn’t see you started. ar Lutik has some great critics there; the orca is my favorite whale as well.

#63

thanks james :bounce:

#64

Surely good and well-informed points from ar LutiK there - I do like the model so far actually, and the slightly stubby shape makes it look very solid, so it works well already in a sort of impressionistic way.

#65

For start the model looks fine. I dont have enough knowledge about whales but from the snaps which you are using as your reference, I agree with Ar lutik the head needs to be more conic shaped. As far as modeling is concerened the wireframe looks clean.

It is really a good start, Keep up good work dude:thumbsup:

#66

JamesMK & madshooter thanks for passing and criting :thumbsup:
I think you both are right and I`am going to change it
so all whale lovers wait for the updates :bounce:

#67

:thumbsup: Ok ,it`s si cool and great and no need to say any crit .keep it .hope to see more WIP .goodlcuk …

#68

Hi Tony, it’s a great great idea you get, and a nice start for the orca. I will keep an eye on your work :wink:
Continue like that

#69

Ramtin_moom & djiemsi thanks and wait for updates :bounce:

#70

Nice work tony

Keep going:thumbsup:

#71

thanks Ahmed Hosny

#72

Save Willy? (or it was Billy, can’t remeber) Cool stuff.

Good luck.

#73

thanks for passing suk-grigorij and good luck to you too

#74

hey best one, that’s a good start (modelling) I think the top fin might be too big but otherwise the proportions seem correct. Now add some detail, go go go! :wip:

#75

thanks coCoKNIght I will change it and I will add details

#76

I decided to remodel the orca since I didn`t like the first one very much
there are still alot of work to do on this model to actullay look like an orca

#77

still working on the orca and this is what I have so far

#78

so what do u think everyone :bounce:

#79

Much better. Maybe it could be slightly longer? The “nose” needs to be defined a bit more to better show the forehead I think. Looks like you got the basics of it, just tweaking from here on out.

Here are some refs that might help with the “nose”, body, and skin texture:
http://www.worldwidewhale.com/images/orcas/orcaface.jpg
http://www.darlingcetaceans.com/Orca%20calf.JPG

#80

thanks for your crits James :twisted: I will try to change the “nose”:scream: and see how it goes :bounce: