No wlasnie symetrycznosc troche boli… Tak samo jak rowniutka linia budynków. Moze dodasz chodniki, stragany jakies bardziej fikusne budynki? Pomaga zerkniecie na jakies fotki budynków ktore są teraz modne wśród architektówi.
Pomysl ogolnie niezly ale moze zastanów sie nad jakims bardziej dybamicznym, spektakularnym ujeciem akcji 
pozdrawiam i powodzenia :buttrock:
At first I want to say Thank you for great feedback 
I changed symetrical wiev radically, and I had new idea. I mixed old style of architecture (like in my city) with this sience-fiction buldings. And meteor fall 
All together should be rather spectacular (I hope so).
pawlack,
thx for replying to my thread.
very nice environment concepts. last concept is much more interesting
than the ones before. but i loved the stretched perspective of the first one.
it has lots of movement.
keep it up.
The new composition is a definate improvement! looks better overall. maybe you could add in people running or, seeing as the meteor looks like its already hit the ground, they could be getting blown away, along with cars, lamposts, buildings etc. Good luck! and hopefully see some more concepts soon
Hi Pawlack,
Im actually digging your first sketch more than the last two. I think the worms eye view chose for your initial sketch carries more impact and shows the disaster thats happening in a more upfront and personal level. The last sketch, while good, seems to lack this. The meteor feels too far away and lacks the dynamics that your initial sketch has.
Thanks for your comments on my sketches and whatever you decide though, keep the updates coming! - J
Thanks again for replies for my post. I payed attention to your comments. This time i tried to destroy the static feel of city. I have added some futuristic planes It could be wiev from one of them. Hope you like it.
what’s up, I like #8, street on the left it’s very good,
maybe you could put kind of track in the main direction, something like a meteor would live when it hits, going down diagonal, I think this could break the static in the composition,
like those cars, that helps with the dynamic,
really like if you go down little like a v shape on the right
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Hi Pawlack, I like the concept. The first couple of views you did form low down gave the thing a really massive presence, kind of putting the viewer right in the path of the comet, whereas the birdseye view detaches them a bit more. If you go with the birdseye view, why not try moving the comet so it’s right up close to the viewer, with the city roads detroyed behind it, buidlings half collapsed, showing why a meteor crash would be so spectacular.
But if it were me, I’d go for the low down view, and maybe add some screaming, fleeing people, that way you get the size of the meteor, and you still get to add in your mix of scifi and tradional architecture.
Intresting perspective. What direction does this meteor actually fall from, I can’t figure that out 
When I saw your first sketch a couple of days ago I thought it was godzilla or something striking the city (does anyone else see the claws on the left??) Now it’s more clear good luck No i dobrej zabawy
hey man really cool work. i cant wait to see some colors on that. i see most of the image… but i guess its nothing without color right now.
Uhh hardest thing. It’s veeeeery quick color test. What do you think? I can change nearly everything
Please give opinions, even if you seriously dislike that, it’s very important to me
Thank you.
hey Pawlack, I like this, just tilt it a little CCW, like 15%. My neck was kinda hurting, tilting my head to look at it:) Keep it up man, great mood you have going!
hey man
the color looks awsome I think it’s just right
just right on, if you combine them both I mean that very clean drawing and that kind of brush that’s strong, just keep in mind those little highlights very importent, they don’t tell you that at school
its looking good! I’ll stay in touch for more updates. a meteor idea sounds like lots of destruction which is spectacular ofcors
Im sorry for long time between entries but i don’t have much time - I started school. Here I have set color palette. No revolutions from this time, but If you think I should I will change everything so please give your critics even rude ones
