Spectacular 2D Entry: Arthur Gil Larsen

#21

I canceled the dragon concept for now, and created 3 other sketches instead.
which one do you like the best?

#22

Thanx for the advice am7=)
Yeah. I was looking at your “Master and servant”. I realy think you should finnish that dragon pic someday. (though I made my dragon rider before I saw yours. That just shows how often that idea is used ^^)

I look forward seeing your entry aswell. Im definatley gonna follow yours aswell

#23

Cool! I like the second one. some cool ideas there, keep it going!

#24

Thanx enialadam=)
I think I like that one the best too.
Ill create a new drawing from that consept sketch then, and add some colours…

#25

yeh the second one looks great!

#26

I chose the middle consept for now, and started to fill in some basic colour to see where this is going…

#27

It is amazing how many people alread have work on the challenge. Best of Luck to you. :thumbsup:

#28

looking excellent com! no crits just yet

#29

Cool!! This is coming along great! I can’t wait to see more progress.

Nice work!

#30

Cool Idea, I will be checkin in later, holla!:thumbsup:

#31

I like this idea, have you decided if it’s the final thing you want to go with?

Anyway, some comments about the composition. As the topic is spectacular of this challenge, I feel that you could try to push the limits abit more here. Instead of doing an overview shot, you might consider placing the camera in a frog-perspective view - showing closeups of the people underneath the ship/waterfall at the bridge. And then you see the ship at the top of the waterfall above them.

You could try to put the camera down on the ground on the bridge, looking up towards the waterfall/ship and at the same time showing the emotion and expression at the peoples faces. (you could even put it behind beneath the bridge, as you could paint people on their way to jump out from the bridge into the water). It’s an hard thing to do, do draw perspective at that angle and still get the objects required into the picture in order to tell the story. But I think it could be worth the effort. Anyway, you should tryout different compositions - just keep it loose and block out the main shapes. Try to think of where the camera should be placed in order to achieve the correct mood and effect from you’r image when people look at it. :slight_smile:

Anyway, keep it up! :thumbsup:

#32

I got some tips for adjusting the angle, so I did. I also changed the bridge into a “swaying” bridge to get a more dynamic feel into the image.

Is it allright?

#33

wow! I like this new angle a lot. Nice work! :slight_smile:

#34

i dunno if u’d understand this,but maybe we shud see more of underneath the ship…ah i can’t explain.

but i like this new angle better!!

#35

yeah. I know what you mean.
I would have to twist the angles even more, so I can still se the overside of the bridge.
Ill try to make a new one.

#36

Yet another new angle and concept.
Im combining the ship with 4 winged cratures who are draggin the bridges apart, and pulling the ship down the waterfall…

#37

I think I prefer the other concept before this one :slight_smile: I liked the angle and perspective more. :slight_smile:

#38

WOOT Comlock, I see your hard at work buddy. I have to agree with Enialadam here and say that you should go with the previous angle. It much more dramatic , kind of creeps up on you.

#39

I kinda like this one also…
Quick base colours and some stars to bring in some extra mood…

So many consepts now…

#40

Thanx=)
yeah, I agree. I like this one better.
There’s something strange with the perspective on the last one