Hi people.
Just got the Daily Deviant on this piece:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8446794/
so I thought i’d post it here as people are likely to have a very concise 3D eye for criticism.
Modelled in Max, rendered in Brazil and composited in Photoshop with some
digi-paint for the waves etc. There are some photographs stitched in too
(the small jet-fighters, the land mass and the odd detail on the hive island)
Hope you all like.
the environment and the effects all look great. I would have just put a little more variation in the textures of the ship.
looks great
You’ve done a nice piece of 3D art here, some little crits though… 
:shrug: Doesn’t the largest, closest lens flare appear to be behind the ship? Is it supposed to be?
:shrug: The smoke effect does look very 2D, but is quite effective as it is
:shrug: More detail is needed on that well-designed ship I think. Do you have a bigger image?
The sense of depth is really well created in the image
A good atmosphere is generated as well, maybe a few different skylines or colour tones would improve it further? Maybe a dawn or twilight setting?
All in all, a good piece! I reckon ya could improve it dramatically though
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