Sketchbook Thread of D4ng3rmouse

#7

Right here as promised are some of the sketches ive been doing recently. mainly ive just been working on my drawing, getting the correct proportions and poses rather than anything else and trying to speed up my work flow. I think im beginning to get somewhere but i still have a lot more practicing to go.

Thats all of them for now. I’m not sure now whether i should continue doing this though or try and do some longer studies and looking at shading. Any tip or comments are welcome as always. Hopefully as I said before now im getting used to London and work I’ll be able to post and contribute more regularly.

#8

Hi…James…:slight_smile:

Nice to see you back, I remember that painting from awhile back…:slight_smile:
I think Loomis is good for some things, but I much prefer the teaching methods of Burne Hogarth myself…You might try getting his books…will really give you a better approach for doing the DYNAMIC poses and figures that you seem to be drawn to…:slight_smile:
JUST A THOUGHT AND SUGGESTION, as I am looking at your latest work…:slight_smile:
Really looking forward to seeing more of your studies,and think that once you master the drawing, you will do FANTASTIC PAINTINGS…Just takes time and practice, and a willingness to get there, which you have shown, by coming back, and starting from the beginning…:thumbsup:
TAKE CARE
Glenn

#9

I like your stick figure studies of motion. It really help define the skeletal structure when the hips move and stuff. Your digital painting is fantastic. How loong have you been digitally painting? My only suggestion is her upper arm seems a bit skinny, but not too noticable. Have a porportional problems myself. It comes with practice I am finding out. Keep posting.

#10

Hey thanks very much for the comments. I’m quite enjoying getting back into drawing, I find its quite relaxing after sitting in front of a computer all day, not that i don’t love my job.

Glen - Thanks for the suggestions, ive been looking at your work for a while and I really love the style and feel some of your images have, truely inspiring. I have to admit that i’ve not heard of Burne Hogarth before but i will have a have to have a look around and see what i can find. I was using the loomis books as a ref just because I have been trying to improve my general proportions and pose but whenever I draw a dynamic pose i have to admit they feel a bit static so ill be interested to see the method applied by Hogarth. I really love seeing some of the dynamic drawings the people on this forum do, in some cases it almost feels that its about to move. What i find more stagering is that they have suggested all this in such simple sketches sometimes, just a few lines. Ill have ago this weekend at doing some more sketches and see how it goes.

Aggie93 - Again thanks for the kind words about the painting. I have to admit that i have done very little digital painting or traditional painting. Thats actually the first and only digital painting i have ever really done, i did it for myslef really just to see if I could actually do it. When i was at art college I wanted to study painting but i was told that I didn’t have the skill for it and told to do something else. Not very supported really so I did it for that reason too. Just to prove to myself that if i tried I could achieve something. For now im going to stick to the drawing as rebecca suggested a while back and once i feel a bit more confident in that area i would like to go back and start looking a digital painting again. Its actually my birthday in a couple of weeks so hopefully im going to get a wacom. The tablet i have at the moment isn’t great.

Anyway thanks for the support and suggestions again. Looking forward to the weekend to do some sketching. I think that im starting to see an improvment in my work and over time hopefully ill get better and better :).

#11

Hi…James…:slight_smile:

You can get his books through the internet…not sure of the spelling, but Eibrus . com or Amazon .com…They are pretty inexpensive if you buy them used…:slight_smile:
Where you are at now, I would say the best one to get is …DYNAMIC FIGURE DRAWING, which is his second one,…the first one is DYNAMIC ANATOMY, which deals mostly with the muscle groups, which you probably have good examples of in Loomis already.
DYNAMIC FIGURE DRAWING, deals more with how to creat dynamic poses in a realistic convincing manner…forshortening, action, ect…GREAT BOOK…:thumbsup:
I have them all, and still find myself going through them, whenever I get stumped by a hard pose, or lighting problem ect.
I had him as a teacher years ago…The man really knew his stuff, and had a great method of teaching, which he put into all of his books…hope you are able to get them…I think, if you do,… you will really enjoy, and learn a lot from them…:slight_smile:
TAKE CARE
Glenn

#12

Hi D4ng3rmouse,

I love your sketches, above all the motion in these pics.
And your digital work is impressive!

I see, I have to work harder ^^

#13

Hello people im back again hopefully for a considerable longer amount of time. We finally after 4 and a half months of ordering it have the internet at home, which makes it a lot easier for me to post. Don’t get that much time at work. Christmas was fairly busy too but now im starting to get back into the habbit of drawing and there seems to be an even greater resource here than there was before.

Firstly thanks spiritdreamer i went a found the Burne Hogarth book you mentioned and I am finding it a very interesting approach to figure drawing. Just need a bit more practice and study. At the moment I have decided to have ago at the head workshop from a while back as I’d like to practice trying to imrpove my drawing of one area of the body.

Here are my first 2 attempts

I was fairly happy with this when i started, but i think i got the angle slightly wrong and some of the proportions are out. Her face just looks a bit to wide and it doesn’t really resemeble the painting that much so ill prob have another go at this at some point. I’m also not that great at shading with a pencil as I think i tend to work to light and not have enough levels of variation in tone.

This second one I’m a bit more happy with. I tired to use a softer pencil 6B i think and tried to get a bit more of a tonal range. Its not great but its better than before. I think the pose is a bit better in this one too although i think again that i have made the face a little bit too wide.

My aim for now is to try and do a sketch of at least 1 of the heads each day and see my progress over a month.

#14

Hi nice sketches :slight_smile: I especially like the gymnastics ones…probably because they remind me of when I used to be in gymnastics…that was great fun, why don’t they have classes for adults? :frowning: Ah anyway…they really show movement well! I’m working on those loomis manikins too right now, you’ve done a good job so far!

#15

Hi…James…:thumbsup:

I like those head studies…great the way you keep your notes of observations, with the drawing…nice practice to get into, will be very useful when you look back at them to compare with your newer stuff…:thumbsup:
About the Hogarth book…glad you were able to find it…:slight_smile:
I would not advise copying his images,…the style of drawing that he uses, is strickly for teaching purposes only, and is over emphsized to show what he is teaching, and is really not meant to be imatated or copied, unless you desire to make that your style.
Rather you should read what he says, and see how it works by seeing how it is applied in his drawings, and the drawings and paintings of all the great masters of the past, and the present.
I find that a lot of people in this forum disregard his books and teachings, in favor of a prettier style that they can imatate and copy,
but then when it comes time to create figures from thier own imaginations, they seem to be totally lost, for the simple reason that they never bothered to read what he was saying, and to put it into practice in thier own way or style, but instead just copied his teaching style of drawing, without truely understanding the princables behind it…Almost like disregarding Michelanglio, because you don’t like his style of painting…pretty foolish thing to do, I would say…same goes for disregarding the teachings of Burne Hogarth, who solidified the knowlage in book form of Michelanglio…All of the prinables of creating great figures as the great masters did and do, are in his books,and only a fool would disregard that knowlage…just my opion though…:slight_smile:
Anyway,…I think you are on the right path with your studies, and are showing great progress…can’t wait to see more of your work, and progess…:thumbsup:
TAKE CARE
Glenn

#16

Decided to tackle this one yesterday. This is a pretty quick sketch maybe 30mins to 45. I was gonna start to add the shading but I quite like it like this for some reason. I might go back to it and shade it anyway because at least now I have a version of it before. Haven’t got around to doing another head today yet, went for a wander around london to test out my new camera I got for christmas. Its got quite a lot of features to get used to and its been a while since I have been out taking any photos, hopefully I’ll get back into it. Now I’m gonna get back to doing my 4th head to keep up with my head a day schedule. Thank sagain for the advice guys and I’ll keep trying my best.

*Edit YEY im on my secondpage lol - end of outburst :slight_smile: **

#17

Well heres no4. I went through stages on not liking this and liking it. I think now its finished that its ok. It resembles the sculpture, but i think my shading has let me down again. Theres just to many patches where it seems a bit flat so I guess thats something I’m gonna have to work on a bit. I think the hair on the left hand side went a bit wrong as well. I have a tendancy to start to get less motivated as I get near to completing it so I end up taking short cuts and they just don’t work :). Right thats all for tonight im off to bed for now, work in the morning.

#18

Hi

these “rather quick” exercises are an excellent way to improve vastly.
I’ve been thinking about revisiting the head challenge thread and after seeing your progress in only these few sketches… I think I really will :slight_smile:

Keep at it!

#19

WOW! You are a hidden gem in this ocean of forums! Great work here. Just wanted to say that and I hope to see more from you.:slight_smile:

#20

Eek hadn’t realised it had been so long since i had done any drawings or posted any at least. Ben having some probs with my eyes since November now and that doesn’t help much. Anyway was watching some stuff by glen keane today and really got my inspired to get back to the drawing again. Hopefully i can stick at it a bit better this time. Anyway here are a few sketches from over the last few months. Ones at the top are older and they get more recent as they go down. Any feedback would be very welcome

#21

These last 2 pages I did today. Fairly happy with them seeing as havn’t drawn anything for a couple of months. You’ll notice they doin’t have eyes and thats just that at the mo eyes are giving my some trouble and just end up runing my sketches. I also worked on these ones faster than i usually do. I’m trying too loosen up a bit and not get bogged down in making them competly perfect. I tend to find when i do that at the mo they actually look worse or too stiff and boring. Oh and obv the little manga style girlis actually a sketch from a still frame of the cat returns which i happened to be watching and its cute lol :slight_smile:

#22

Your first and only digital painting is very beautiful, and your quick head sketches are amazing O: .
I really like how the girl in the white pages look, especially the first one. You seem to be having some problem with long faces since you wrote in your sketches. There’s some kind of rule (more like guideline) that says that the head is supposed to be divided in three sections, of course not all faces are equal but it works as a guideline :slight_smile: , there’s also another one which says that the head is supposed to be something like 8 eyes long (I never tried that one but I read about it :confused: )

Edit: forgot to say that your manga girl is very cute X3, I really like the eyes.

#23

Just a few more sketches today.

Thanks VincereCaos for your comments. Yeah porportions i still find difficult,there seem to be so many rules to remember i guess it comes a bit easier once you have a bit more sketching and practice under your belt. Well i’ll keep going and see how i progress.

#24

Hey its been a while since I posted any of my work. I am still sketching away when i get a chance but have to fit it inbetween all my other stuff. Anyway heres another head, im spending more time on this than I usually do. The last image in theis progression is after about an hour and 15mins i think maybe a bit more. Shading has never been my strong point, i tend to be afraid to make anything to dark so I’m trying hard this time to create a nice range of tones to help make it look more 3d. I’m actually pretty happy with it at the mo which is surprising. Ill try and finish it off tommorow when i get home from work. If anyone has any comments or tips or anything then id love to here them :slight_smile: Ta

#25

very small update, did some more bits on the face,started to do the hair. The hair scares me a bit, theres so much detail im not really sure where to start and i have a feeling its just gonna end in disaster. Also decided to start going tot he national portrait gallery each lunchtime to get some practice and so im away from the computer so hopefully that will go well.

#26

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