Sketchbook Thread of Cg_Icecube - 2D/3D

#41

I’ll jump in…Although moreso busy with work from office…

#42

Plz help me on last piece…since i m developin it for a magazine…C&C are welcome…hw cn i improve on it more:D

#43

Hello Richa, I think that my suggest would be, work more on the hair, if you want to do a copy of the photo, I think that is a bit lighten than the original, and it have more yellowish hues than the original, add a bit of redish tones my recomendation is, work the hair from the dark to light, you should set the lower value first, then the highest value and then work it based in those 2 values with the color picker, I always work the hair this way, wich is very diferent with the skin for example, for that I work from a medium value, hope this helps, the rest is ok for me:D

PS and use some sparkled brushes.

#44

hey rich u did u gud job…u can work on the final touch ups.like mix up of strokes is not fully done…yes may be coz of ur busy schedule…but datz the last wrk.
jst spent some time on finishing like strokes near arm pit…lips…n…sme shadow area…rest u r doin a very gud job…rally nice wrk…
tezi

#45

Good to see a new piece! Are you eyeballing the proportions, or using a grid? :slight_smile:

M nt so perfect yet in Anatomy…so, fr a quick work…i preferred using guides fr setting proportions in Photoshop…
Abt participating in OFDW…a work area i admire…but 24hours is really less time:sad: to do everything…m still waiting to have a small break frm my office to spend wholeheartedly time here…

#46

Hi all!!!

Alas!.. uploadin here the first step of my Tut on paintin hair in Photoshop…This is abt drawin direction of hair strands…

#47

#48

Did sm color correction and worked more on hair…

#49

Hey thr,

Neat… really neat:applause: . good one. I think you can improve on the color on the cheeks. It looks very nice as a painting. But when compared with the picture I think somewhere it looses its skin softness may be too many patches are affecting or it requires a color make over…

Good work… keep it up.:thumbsup:

Sandeep

#50

Great paintings, looking forward to more! With the female painting try to seewhat the forms and colours are and not to think what they are.

A critique before I go, some parts of her face (under the nose and the eyes) seem too sharp of an edge, try smoothening them a little. I dont have much experience painting in photoshop myself, so I could be wrong :shrug:

#51

Heya Richa, :slight_smile:

You should join the ongoing Workshop:

Anatomy Lesson Series: Body Part 1 - The Head
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=375031&page=1&pp=15

I didn’t know if you had seen it. :slight_smile: Going to invite the others from the Workshop as well. :slight_smile:

Cheers,

~Rebeccak

#52

Hi Richa-doll. Hows things?

The new piece looks great! - your shading and proportions have improved greatly. Only minor crits I can provide are the chin is too sharp on either side, the lips look a little twisted on her left and the streaks in her hair don’t look really natural yet. The first 2 should be easy, for the hair try and build up the block of different colored strands to show the light source. Right now it looks like it was dyed in streaks. Make sense?

Don’t give up yet Richa, this will be a very nice portfolio piece : )

#53

I ve been working in 3D on Character Designs. From Idea Development and brainstorming to digitally painting in photoshop and finally modeling it in 3D.

Quick Bio: Character design is based on Walrus (found in Antartica region).
His name : Mr.Wills a.k.a. Walrus…Hez a marine biologist and is mutated in a project gone wrong. Hez silly, doesnt know nething abt robbery as in hw to do it…Oh did i tell u hez gona be a bank robberer for his living nw.Abt his clothes- wearin a skin tight shirt and tight gallace pants.His robbery would depend on his gadgets…Funny part can be that his gadgets ll just nt work and thru his luck & silly mistakes robbery ll be success!..Abt his appearance- Face- Walrus, with black eye mask; Body- fat, bulgy, short legs. He plans to do robbery in a vry stealthy manner.Char. is cute, funny silly cz hez stuck in a situation.

Software used: Autodesk 3Dsmax 8v.

#54

Richa!

These are adorable, and I enjoyed reading your description as well. :slight_smile: One crit might be that his arms seem muscular enough to seem a bit threatening; with a cartoon character, you may want to make him seem a bit more friendly, but that’s only a thought. :slight_smile:

How are you lately? :slight_smile:

Cheers,

~RK

#55

:slight_smile: Cheers :slight_smile: Rebecca,

I ve been struggling for time…Recently was busy with Character Design and more work…And also feel very guilty of not being able to participate in Anatomy Lesson Series: Body Part 1 - The Head

Although, i have saved few heads to work on wenevr i get chance…

Also Best of Luck for Figuratively Speaking Workshop II :thumbsup:
Wish i could take Ivan’s place:D

Thanks for liking the character and also for the crit on arm…ll refine and post again:)

#56

Hi everybody…i know it is too much of a delay…but now i have decided to dedicate my time strictly towards digital painting the 50 heads…Better Sooner than never:wise:

Herez 047:

Photoshop7
Time : 1 & 1/2 hr.

Awaiting paintovers from Master Rebecca:)

C&C welcome everybody:)

#57

Hey CgIcecube, nice thread there! I really like the painting of the old man :thumbsup:

about the 3d model of the Walrus - I find the legs seem a bit too weak to support the rest of his body, while it looks good in 2d I think it’s less feasable in 3d… just an opinion :slight_smile:

Keep it going :bounce:

#58

Hi Intervain:)
Great thanks for ur C & C:)
About Walrus- His body proportions have been exaggerated to give him a light friendly look, although i need to work on arms…they seem to ve becm more muscular than pre-vis…Thatz my first ever attempt on character design…I’ll post more updates soon…Some with perfect anatomy and some with exaggerated proportions:)

#59

Hey Richa - very cute CG Character. I really like him though I like his body being rolly all the way up (like in the sketch) will look better. Right now just his belly is fat not the chest and I think it worked better with the really strong arms.

#60

Shay:)i jus need to do rework on the char…
Thanks a lot for liking it:)

Well herez an update on face…