Site Crit

#1

http://robles.callutheran.edu/~jmhirsh/web.html

I want to put some flash elements in this but I need site cits first. C&C welcome and appreciated as well as which you think is best!

-Oracle

#2

It looks good so far. Only the stripe under “Grand Nationals” is too feathered and should be worked on with anti alias or at least a little bit blurred with PhotoShop.
I like the text size. It’s good to read and also the contrast with the white core and black outline is a good idea. Could you say some words about the contents? What will your site be about?

#3

I personally thought that the third one was best. It showed more depth and personality than the first two…

Just my two cents…

#4

the page is for a class. We have to come up with a holiday idea (I chose an event coz holidays are boring), and do everything from print to web to video and even the administration side. My event is as you’ve seen a gaming tournament similar to CPL. Its not real, but its meant to look and feel real. Our job is to make professional contacts in the buisness world and make new friends and collegues. If you guys have any other questions feel free to ask away, ill answer anything!

#5

Update:
Most of the pages are done except for Event, About and Contact.

Let me know what you think:
http://robles.callutheran.edu/~jmhirsh/test/index.html

#6

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