Short Film-'Monkey Magic'

#14

nice job mate, especially the modeling/lighting as well as the animating- looks great I think

#15

elllooo rodi…

Great to finally be able to see your full reel. Everything is looking great :slight_smile: You must be so proud of what you have accomplished eh?

Best of luck in your job hunt my friend…

#16

Thankyou very much Marco :thumbsup:

Hey Tughan, I wish I had been even more adventurous with the camera work, cheers again

Thanks Simon, much appreciated!

Ngarte, I’m very happy to have it finished, thanks, but this is not my reel, i have cut the film up and put in some other works to make my reel which i will be sending off.

#17

I found this finally. those 2 images are very impressive, I have seen one of them before i believe, and have also seen some of the test animations. But I cannot download any of the files here, really like to see it :cry:

#18

Hi AL_KEATON I’m glad you like the images, you need to ‘Save Target As’ it should work :slight_smile:

#19

I finally downloaded it (very slow speed 6-10kbps??)) Film is pritty amazing, Lighting, animation, just great- Someone should put it at that first page where they show the best stuff, but you should get faster server.

#20

very very very funny!!!
good dancer and I love your animation!!!

your are super!!!

#21

Nice work:thumbsup:

#22

MWOOOHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA!!!
LMFAO!!! :bowdown: :bowdown:

That was the FUNNIEST THING I’VE EVER SEEN!!!

#23

Cheers AL_KEATON, Here is a Mirror download big thanks to 'James:

Monkey Magic-DOWNLOAD

Valentina, ya3: I didn’t think i was making a funny film, but its so great that you guys find it so,

Ahmed, Thanks also- :thumbsup:

I have just graduated and looking for employement, if anybody is interested then please see my contact details on my film or website.

Thanks

#24

Been watching it over and over again for some time and I just noticed something :rolleyes:
The bit where he hits the ball, you don’t see it hit it, he just pretends he is hitting it, or is it my eyes playing up on me again lol
:thumbsup:

#25

Sweet job dude!

However the foot-crashing-through-the-grond-counter hit 3000 times!!! Now you know why no one animates white shoes on the black ground…

It had a nice style in the begining but the whole magic part didn’t come through, some parts were very good but the foot and shoulder are extremely distracting.

Was that a lens flare in the begining? Lens flare = no

Some nice motion here and there but not much overlap and followthrough.

#26

well hmm where to start… crashing, lense flair of doom, or stiff animation? hmmm lets start with teh last. the tail which could have some super sweet secoundary action , but most of the time it is jerky and stiff. soem of the poses, especially when the mokey has his arm at nighty degrees are really stange looking, it might be proportions or somthing. the camera angle could use some work as well. use and extreame upshot for your MJ dance moves to really show off. Lets see just scrap the lense flair at the start of the show, its just lame, there isnt even a visible light in that scene ad most people have gotten sick of lense flairs ever sense photoshop 2.0. now about the crashing, i know that its impossible to have a scene with no crashing, and somtimes yeah you need things to crash. but every single shot has a bunch, and big mistake to put white soals on his shoes, you can see so easyly the crash. if you still want attenion on his feet make the tops of the shoes white, or put some dots on the side. hm well i guess thats it, you should have gone for a shorter pice and made it super sweet, quality over quantity right? ok so i dont sound like a totaly hard ass it was good, but if you take soem of this into consideration it would realy shine. -M

#27

Well, i dont know what to say, … its a dancing monkey, in a set that wouldnt even show up in a “b” movie. Its good to see you followed through and finished it but maybe you should go back and clean up those crashes. props for not having any “poping”, but since he is dancing, etc. maybe a pop used correctly could enhance the motion. speaking of which, are you a character animator, or a motion animator. all i saw was motion, you could put any character in that scene and it would be the same. character animation doesnt have to be giant and grand. how many disney, pixar, dreamworks, etc. movies have big dance scenes (3d movies not 2d movies). if you want to work on music videos you should not be using a monkey. its nothing like a human, and simply showing a monkey crash around the scene without interacting with any other characters wont cut it with a company. you need to show them you can make the same thing they are making right now. otherwise why would they hire you? just so you can make lesser products?

well good luck on cleaning that thing up. you might be best to take it and cut it up into animation chunks then mix them into more animation to show you can do different things. as it is you seem to be to worried about the fact is has a story or some form of linear cohesion. show me you can animate someone dacing, runing, crying, interacting with anouther person, falling down and dieing, i dont care, just not anouther dancing monkey.

is that a hole in the tree, a spider web or some broken class from the ball???

oh ya i forgot the tail, the tail has more animation when you can only see its shadow than it does when its actual on screen. the tail of a monkey could be used to excentuate its mood, dont just have it flap about because it should be moving.

oh ya, your website says “animation - modeling - welcome” what are you saying? is “welcome” a new job i dont know of, or are you saying animation or modeling jobs are welcome, its right at the top of your site. if someone doesnt understand what you want to say, then they cant trust you to try to express what they want you to say.

well good job and good luck if you keep working you can make it happen,

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well i have to take back my comment about only having a dancing monkey, i found your demo and you have pedro dancing with a cactus and not getting on a motorcycle. and then 3 minutes of black, i know its good to have black at the end of a vhs demo reel, but try and cut it for the web. it makes everyones downloads that much slower. its just sloppy. its good to know you cut animation into parts to show what you like best.

keep on truckin

#28

Thankyou guys for taking the time to crit my animation,

Heey KingBruce, your right he acts like he is hitting a ball…just a part of his ‘dance’!!

Hyndra7, thanks man, Lens flair no? lol, I like it man,
The shoulders really that distracting huh? wish i could re-do it now. :shrug:

Hey Saladbar, Thanks for the reply, il take that all in, cheers. The lens flare is an artistic choice, i know that in the 3d world, lens flares are a cliche thing to use, but i’m not scared of that, just because it’s cliche doesnt mean i cant use it right? and i think i used it very sparingly. :thumbsup:

Hi there Phillycheese81,

speaking of which, are you a character animator, or a motion animator. all i saw was motion, you could put any character in that scene and it would be the same.

I’l start by saying that I wanna find work as a character animator,
But im an animator, motion or character,

is that a hole in the tree, a spider web or some broken class from the ball???

haha, great one:rolleyes: well i thought of it as a film set. So i can try and stretch the imagination, -“it’s what ever you wanted it to be”- is what my teacher used to say when she couldn’t answer a question, so i’l say that too…

Totally agree about the tail, had some setting up trouble with that, should have just animated FK instead of spline IK :cry: no excuses really

oh ya, your website says “animation - modeling - welcome” what are you saying? is “welcome” a new job i dont know of, or are you saying animation or modeling jobs are welcome, its right at the top of your site. if someone doesnt understand what you want to say, then they cant trust you to try to express what they want you to say.

This thread was supposed to be about my film, but thanks anyhow for pointing that out, but if you look at it. The colour of ‘welcome’ is Red (like my name) which seperates it from ‘animation, modelling’ so what im saying is ‘rodikaya, welcome’, not as you suggest “animation, modelling, welcome” No ones ever mentioned that so i will maybe re-think the position…

well i have to take back my comment about only having a dancing monkey, i found your demo and you have pedro dancing with a cactus and not getting on a motorcycle. and then 3 minutes of black, i know its good to have black at the end of a vhs demo reel, but try and cut it for the web. it makes everyones downloads that much slower. its just sloppy. its good to know you cut animation into parts to show what you like best.

Do i know you from somewhere? LOL someone i know says ‘pedro’:smiley: hahaha

Thanks alot man i will keep trucking!! I’d really like to see some Pro work, maybe you got a website or links i can download and have a look. Cheers

#29

Suprise suprise, i guess today is full of suprises, you managed somthing some dont; take crits well, even when given on a final version page instead of WIP. good job.

I will check around for stuff but you need to choose, animation/modeling. people who can do both, dont for a living. until you are making a living, choose one. so you can do your best at that.
why do you want to see work?
do you know what you have to work on to improve yourself? do you want new theorys? do you want good examples, or somthing pretty?
focus, focus, i have a friend who is into theory and anouther who is into art… i have some WIP on cgtalk. i am currently working on a new character in teh focused crits.

anyways…

if you know the difference between FK IK and Spline IK then you should be able to go back and fix those crashes. you are just shooting yourself in the foot. if you are starting at the bottom there isnt someone to come along and clean your work for you, you are doing that for others.

dont stretch the imagination. if you rerender it, fix the spider web. someone will look at your demo reel once and only for 90 seconds. dont give them any reason to wonder and hit the eject button.

#30

Suprise suprise, i guess today is full of suprises, you managed somthing some dont; take crits well, even when given on a final version page instead of WIP. good job.

Haha, were you just trying to really get under my skin,:applause:

if you know the difference between FK IK and Spline IK

Hahaha, you really are trying

Nice one Philly.

#31

why do you want to see work?

forgot to answer that, I wanna see your work so i can try and understand where your Crits are coming from. I can clearly see your a pro…ahhh got 2 go…:shrug:

#32

I would have to agree with a bunch of stuff being said. However, regardless of the lens flares and such, watching it, I really cannot get past the crashing. As an animator, the worst thing a person can have is crashing. It is the most obvious clue that something is 3d, regardless of the fact it is supposed to look 3d or not. Real life things do not crash and things don’t crash in 2d either. To someone without a trained eye, crashing can just feel weird, even if they aren’t aware of it. It is one of the first things people will look for when they are checking your reel. There is just far too much of it in this animation and the fact that you were not able to catch it while working on it will discourage possible employers from considering you.
As for the animation, it is basically just motion. There are some good poses and ideas and a lot of potential but to be a good character animator you must make your character feel like he has the attitude to match the moves. Anyone can be taught to set keyframes, but it takes a lot of work to get the little subtle movements and the weight of the character.
Cinematically, to each his own. If you are happy with camera shots and use of effects then that is cool. Everyone has their own taste.
I mean it could be really cool, but there are problems holding it back. Even if you never do anything with it, I would suggest fixing it anyway for yourself. Best of luck.

#33

Thanks Hammy, I guess in my defence i should say that the only reason the feets crash is because it was animated on a different surface, it’s no excuse really i should have been keeping an eye out for that kind of stuff. If i was to just show previews (opengl’s) then i may be better off, i can just udjust the floor, I guess thats why alot of animators Dont bother rendering personal stuff out for employers, it can easily like you say give an employer a reaon not to employ me. Well atleast i’m learning.

Cheers