Shipwreck

[mrFloki]

Well its almost done peace any critique?

[Travis]

This is a really stellar piece!

a couple of things that could push it even further

find a way to activate the left side of the image.

maybe add dapeling on the mountain, a lighthouse, anything that can move some of the intrest away from the boat

look at some of eric tiemens paintings and notice how he uses a tiny super saturated spot of color to the dullest part of his painting

try not to load your largest object in front of your brightest value in the most saturated area of your canvas

notice how adding a brighter value reflection on the water wakes up the area a bit

try to find a few areas to knock some detail back and loose some edges

having said all that great work and looking forward to more

[mrFloki]

This is a really stellar piece!

a couple of things that could push it even further

find a way to activate the left side of the image.

maybe add dapeling on the mountain, a lighthouse, anything that can move some of the intrest away from the boat

look at some of eric tiemens paintings and notice how he uses a tiny super saturated spot of color to the dullest part of his painting

try not to load your largest object in front of your brightest value in the most saturated area of your canvas

notice how adding a brighter value reflection on the water wakes up the area a bit

try to find a few areas to knock some detail back and loose some edges

having said all that great work and looking forward to more

i tough that second light points might distract eye from main focal point in older version of painting i had some god rays in background but i removed them was it bad move? or just they where badly used?