It’s for a challenge of 3dsymax.org forum
I hope you like it!!! :rolleyes:
- Serial Experiments Lain -
Hyneria
#1
puppetmastah
#2
Dude really nice!!! You really captured Laine’s room!! Nice lighting too!!! Btw the series were awesome:beer:
syous
#3
technically i cant give any comment coz i suck at it:p
But your pic can be much much nicer if you render with a cinematic angle and some dynamic lightning:cool:
LeeSalo
#4
i agree with syous, the scene is nice, good detail. but it lacks life. you need a beter angle for the camera and some way out lights. Also, and this is just a little also, a few more details. things most people would not even realize are there. lots of detail= emersion.
but, it looks great so far dude!
if you make any changes post them
aeres
#5
The wall textures look out of place, as if haphazardly put together for a render. There is no obvious single light source nor shadows, hence the lack of depth. The glows also seem to be over the top, I would tune it down abit coz it’s a tad too distracting.
modeling wise it looks fine albeit it can benefit from more details, especially the girl’s leg, right now it looks like a tapered cylinder.
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