Ser Bronn of Blackwater (First portrait try:)

#1

Hi guys.

First time i made a portrait work. But i don’t know what’s wrong with this:S
I couldn’t achieved likeness as much as i want. It looks weird a little bit but i dont know why. What is your opinion about this? I tried to make neutral face. Last pic is just an example.
3ds max has a shitty fur system i think.

 [img]http://i.imgur.com/UB793dH.jpg?1[/img]
 
 [img]http://i.imgur.com/KUAYdJQ.jpg?1[/img]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/qnyQVPX.jpg?1[/img]

#2

I’m not an expert but i think your eyes are too big a little but too big for me and the color is to saturate more grey than blue maybe.

An maybe the chin is too low wait for others like i said i’m not an expert !

however nice work for a first time continue !

#3

not a bad start, but it needs more pronounced facial features

#4

Thanks for the answers :)i think i should make eyes a little smaller and sculpt details a little bit.