Secret Agent Entry: Tom Svoboda

#1

Tom Svoboda is entered in the “Secret Agent” update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Concept / pre-visualization: Color test

#2

I like moments in the movie, when the secret agent is discovered and BBB (Big Bad Boss:)) kick his a*s.

#3

whitch version is better, what do you think? thanks for comment

#4

hi,nice start,its hard to choose one,i should say the first one maybe,good luck!:smiley:

#5

I can’t pinpoint exactly what composition is better, but I think that the first concept has an interesting story, and the composition in the second concept works better than in the first one, cause it has more depth.
Hope I’ve helped :slight_smile:
Good luck

#6

I think the Boss may say: “If you dont tell mi true I will call Rocky Balboa.” :))))

#7

At the moment, it’s easier to see what’s going on in the first one because it’s so clean. However, I think the second has more potential. It’s a more novel setting, the characters are larger and have the potential to have much more interesting poses, and there’s a lot more visual interest all aorund. It still needs work - it’s not as readable as it could be and you could probably come up with some more interesting camera angles and perspectives and poses by pushing them further, so I’d suggest to keep working on that. Good luck!

#8

Would choose number 2, with the following suggestions:

  1. Hang all the meat higher, and change the shackling position of the prisoner so that instead of “arms behind his back”… it’s “arms over his head”. That way he is hanging in a manner similar to the other meats.

  2. Make the interior a room-sized freezer

  3. The henchman can be carrying a Butcher Saw while talking to the imprisoned agent:

Just a few suggestions… but remember… it’s your story.

Cheers!
:thumbsup:

#9

Hi,
if I have to choose one, it would be the second one. It just have so much tension and drama on it. Good luck.

#10

Thanks to all for your comment :thumbsup: … it helps me … I choose version number 2 and now I try different camera angle.
Smot

#11

I try another two different camera view. I think that version 2b is more interesting. I will be glad for your criticism. Thanks

Smot

#12

Great work reenvisioning the scene! Of these last two, I think 2A works better: In 2B you loose the atmosphere of the location, the characters are all mostly the same size, and the angle, while being daring, is going to be a real serious pain to draw! :slight_smile: I still also liked your original #1b… I just think the characters are all still a bit too close to each other in size and exaggerating those differences more would make the piece stronger. But I think I could say the same thing about the new 2a. But just my opinion.

BTW, I do like the addition of the meat saw. :thumbsup: Good luck!

#13

I like pre-vizualization :slight_smile:

#14

I still didnt choose the right camera angle, but I have started playing with colors :slight_smile:

#15

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