Secret Agent Entry: Tiziano Baracchi

#21

Nice babes again :slight_smile: You sure have good sense of posing. At first I actually “misinterpreted” the top females pose, but I get it totally now…

#22

Again another kool concept, awesome perspective :applause:

#23

Cool scene. THe last is very interestig…dramatic…and…Sexy…:wink:

#24

I like the way you’re pushing the ‘camera angles’ and comps to add interest and drama. Great stuff, buddy

#25

looks like a good start from ur sketches. Loooking forward for more updates:thumbsup:

#26

I like the last one, cool and sexy camera angle. Great sketch! Good luck man!

#27

Wow, Nevs! Talking about ‘extreme’ angles… Another sketch is coming with a more ‘face to face’ approach, looking forward to your input.

Martin thank you! If I go on with this one I’ll make sure that the values help reading the depth (guess that was part of the mis-interpretation?).

snake08, OZ Thank you very much. :slight_smile:

Mark, thanks pal! I think I really need to work on pushing the PoV in my pieces, to give them some punch, and what better exercise than such a topic as this? :smiley:

nandlaskar Thank you, hope you’ll stay around :slight_smile:

Madness-of-Hamlet A thousand thanks, and good luck to you too!

Another sketch would come in a while, I’d love your opinion on it… :smiley:

#28

And here is option number three in fact it could be just a few minutes after number 2 (or before number 1):
Agent A had what she wanted and was making good her escape, but was intercepted by Agent B bent on retrieving the info or getting it for her side, things got a bit heated here.

I’m treating this Challenge as if it was an industry assignement with a rather open briefing. Would you be so obliging as to play Art Director for me?

Which of the three work better for you? Or which elements do?

Thank you very much!

#29

Wuhuuu! I can see a helicopter in this one. I love those :slight_smile: I think it works. But be careful not to make it look like the beginning of an “adult” scene.

#30

Oops! I realize it’s very scribbly but the nearest agent is wearing a kind of catsuit (the other one wears a qipao), guess what I meant as seams reads like underwear in the sketch…

Glad you like the ‘action’ and helicopter angle :slight_smile:

#31

great sketches all over,the latest ones looks alil too saucy :smiley: ill keep lurking in for more mate:)

#32

yikes ! it is quite saucy! :smiley:
nice dynamic composition however. maybe a slight alteration of the pose ?

#33

I like the contrast between the heli action outside and the more secret kind of thing happening in the room.

keep it up man!

#34

Thank you all for the comments! :slight_smile:

I think the third sketch it’s the one then. :slight_smile:
One thing, though: gauging from your reactions, I think I hit some kind of cultural thing I cannot really see, so I definitely need your help.

Why does it read as ‘saucy’ or risquè for you?

Is the clothing? (the catsuit will be redesigned to avoid the ‘underwear’ look and the other agent can be dressed in a different way if the qipao is too much).

Is it the posing? As I saw it the agent in the sunshades dove to get out of the way of the other’s gunfire, losing the documents in the process and is now scrambling to arm herself, the foot’s positioning avoids any crotch-shot , but if needed the position can be adjusted too.

Would it read as ‘saucy’ if ‘Sunshades’ wore trousers?

#35

The third may be the best…but I feel the agent too much…mmmh…relaxed.
I expect she point the gun or strike some kind of feline pose.
The second is a bit less interesting but have far more pathos.
Anyway…GREAT DRAWINGS :bowdown:

#36

yeah i believe it’s the pose, depends entirely on what she wearing i guess :slight_smile:

#37

Well. Denmark, where I come from, is VERY liberal when it comes to these things. And still I must say, when I picture those two painted with a lot of skin color… well, they are about to have a good time together. Sorry for being a guy here. But I’m sure the final poses and colors will clear my thoughts :slight_smile:

#38

Neubius : got it, thanks! Clothing has been changed.

MartinNielsen: Lol! This teaches me not to draw any frills that could be mistaken for underwear :wink:

OZ, Oh my, thank you! …And your suggestion and my fondness for dual-wielding characters combined. :slight_smile:

I’ll post the revised sketch in a moment, hope you all will like it.

#39

Sketch 3 seemed the overall best, but, according to comments and suggestions needed a bit of fine tuning to avoid possible awkward interpretations and to add a bit of tension.

Here is the revision, ‘Sunshades’ now wears trousers, agent A’s catsuit has been redesigned and she’s got another gun.

Better? Worse? Forget it and start again? :slight_smile:

#40

PERFECT!! TAHT’Z IT!:buttrock: the scene now have an incredible tension!!! looks like the agent stop the second girl before she take the gun and shoot!! Congrats…u did it!