Patrick Yeung is entered in the “Secret Agent” update: View Challenge Page
Secret Agent Entry: Patrick Yeung
Scaled and colored, I still am not sure about the composition…seems to be lacking something but I really not know. hopefully i will think of something soon to improve the picture
So the previous sketches are not that impressive for me…came up with new concept just yesturday
This time it feels more right and possible for me
I agree the other one was missing something. Didnt have the right feel. But the second one you came up with i like more. So is she kinda like a showgirl/ undercover agent? its a neat idea anyways. I like too that in this one its more centered on her as the subject with out the background over ruleing her in the other one. If you have a “mood” kind of lighting like i think your going for , i think this is going to look really good.
Maybe on the left side of the picture where she is aiming the gun, you can have a limp arm with a hand just showing from the bottom side of the page near her foot but not in the light, like she already shot them and their on the floor like the rest, and she is aiming the gun at them still waiting for the last person in the room to finally stop breathing. Or something like that i dunno
I like this idea and interested to see the rest!
I’ve been thinking about the background, making it plain black is kindda boring so I added the sky to enrich the area plus adding to the mood
What do you guys think about the sky, or should I do a vegas city scene instead??
By the way, thanks guys for all of your encouraging comments. The last few steps of the process are always the most painstaking…but it’s easier when I know there are people who enjoy looking at the work
Anyways do you guys think I should add more bodies??
Eliminated the closest bodies on the ground becuase I don’t feel that their bodies are angled right, I will probably add more on the far ground…Not sure about area closer to her…what do you guys think???
So I think the back is kindda weird, so I decided to focus on it(after all it is the focus of the piece), I am gonna find more reference and anatomical pics to see what else I need to add or substract. heres an interesting crop I really like
I wish I could show you guys the full version, you can see the cross-etching on there. and I hope the judges will see the effort I put in…
Common guys tell me what you think!!! I need another pair of eyes to see what I possibly can’t see… :bounce:












