hey guys. this is just a concept sketch ive been working on. the idea was to have my character in an engine room of a cargo ship she just snuk into. im haveing a feeling i might change the pose, we’ll see how it goes.All crits and comments are welcome. peace
Hey Pappy!!! Good to see you on board. Anyway, cool sketch. 
Although I’d urge you to try different poses and see what comes out of it.
yeah, i was thinking of a more sneaky like pose which i think will suit it more better. ill come up with something
Hey guys! yes i decided to change the pose. i think sneakier works better. did a quick colour to work out a colour scheme. Im having a feeling i might change the background. well see how it goes. good luck every one
yea I’m kind of confused on the backround as to where she’s at. but it looks cool so far. I think the more the story is fleshed out the better it’s going to be.
did a couple of rough sketches for my background and finally i decided to go with this one i think ill leave the guard out. its about time to start the real thing.
Hello Pappy!! Your latest one is looking great. Maybe if you offset the cam/pov towards the left and place the guard on the left hand side (I think the guard will add to your composition). Anyway… keep it up.
Look nice but I can’t understand the all scene. Doesn’t matter, I will keep a eye for the next sketch. 
thanks man. the enviroment is meant to be some sort of misile launch station on sea. i definitely need to work on me composition. thanks for the feed back!
Has a nice ‘Modesty Blaise’ feel to it already Pappy. I like the way her pose is going and the guy slumped behind her.
just a more refined version of one of me previous concepts. i think ill make the missile bigger.
hey guys! been working on a new idea which i feel is working better.at the moment im working on the composition and the waiter will be in the foreground. dont worry guys its ketchup. all crits are welcome. Peace
Looks like an ambtous and complicated scene Pappy. Bet you’ll pull it off beautifully. Look forward to watching it progress.
Looking good pappy!! Just to let you know, the perspective of your buildings and tables is a bit off. Keep them coming!!
